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garatheauthor


"Show my head to the people, it is worth seeing." - Georges Danton

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In before Skirts shows up.

I've got to respect anyone who can take a premise and a blowjob and spin it into a 2k story. Really digging the characterization of Sunset and Flash and their relationship dynamic. I guess you need to either be really sharp or really flexible to keep up with Sunset Shimmer, huh?

Penis versus penis.
Dick versus dick.
There is no story.
Just shimmer being a prick getting her random fetish sick.
For what to be significant?
Add any other character and it would be no different.
6/10

10562478
Why did you even read this if you hate this kind of thing? The story summary was pretty obvious about what it was about.

10562493
Because they/re from 4chan

10562498
10562493
I don't hate it, just giving it a review based on my own merits.

>Sunset
Yes!
>It's not another Twilight ship
YES!
>She's got a dick
YES!

10562498
4chan is about doing things that you hate? That explains so much.

10562448
Who do you think wrote it?


10562478

For what to be significant?
Add any other character and it would be no different.

Except this is not a Sunset x Sci-Twi story.
Nor is it a Sunset x Celestia story.
And nor is it a Sunset x Spike the Regular dog story.

This is Sunset with a dick being serviced by Flash Sentry. That has an appeal for the exact characters used--and by an audience that needs far more of this goodness than currently exists on the site as it is.


10562498
Give us moar, plz.

Eldorado
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Copyrighted song lyrics are not allowed on Fimfiction. Those will have to be removed before this can be resubmitted.

I have a fetish of any girl that’s a futa and to be dominated by a girl

You literally made one of my fetishes and turned it into a story 10/10:rainbowwild:

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