• Published 30th Nov 2020
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How Our Queen Fell - SkyHunter62

After all the stress Sunset Shimmer faces at her defeat against the Elements of Harmony,she finds herself in a Hypnotherapy session

How Our Queen Fell written by SkyHunter62
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McBehrer
McBehrer #1 · Dec 1st, 2020 · · ·
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Jesus Christ, get an editor. Commas should not be used like this.

Unity Bringer
Unity Bringer #2 · Dec 4th, 2020 · · ·
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Good start for a first story, but as said, would highly recommend getting an editor of running a pass or two more on editing.

Gaim
Gaim #3 · Dec 24th, 2020 · · ·
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More please

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