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Melody Song


A Bisexual Pegasus with a talent in writing and singing. I can also do magic-long story. Also, Luna is best Princess and the Wonderbolts are awesome. Change my mind, I dare you.

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It was on a warm summer night. Neither brother was able to sleep. And it was that night that changed both of their lives for the better. But can Thorax and Pharynx handle keeping their new relationship secret for long? And when it does come out into the open, can their subjects handle it?

Author's Note: This story takes place in separate timeline from my other changeling-related stories *Contains slight profanity because Pharynx*

Written for the Nov-Dec Incest is Wincest Competition

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 42 )

I likey!

Fraid not m8, Sorry. I will say it probably is good work though if your others stories are any indication. So don't let any negativity deter you! Especially if its from me because I do not intend it that way.

10558381
It's okay, it's not everyone's cup of tea

10558383
That was the perfect response. :twilightsmile: I look forward to your other works!

Dawwwwwwwwwwww
This was sweet

10558434
Heh, glad you like it

10558447
Heh, glad you like it Blu

I feel bad because I love your writing but...I’m having a hard time reading through it.

I dunno why, I think it’s the romance? It just not my cup of tea

10558470
It's okay, everyone has different reading preferences

Well this was an interesting read.

10558506
Thanks, I hope you liked it

To the author - i loved your story!:heart::heart::heart: haven't seen a fic done on these two since a writer named Vocal range!

here's the link (if you're interested in reading it?:raritywink:) www.fimfiction.net/story/396809/brotherly-rivalry-2-societies-acceptance

10558911
Thanks, glad you liked it

10558922
this quickest response i've gotten from an author on this site. usually when i leave a comment it takes several hours later or week.
depends on the story i read, if the premise interests me or i want read more of it.
i'm a writer too but all of works are unpublished & slightly a bit dated (most of them are m/m but i don't hate on other people's ships.) except for sparity i never understood that ship like at all!!!

p.s: the other reason is my laptop...Omg you don't know the hell i've gone through and spare ya the details cause i'm getting rid of it soon:flutterrage: don't worry i have a temporary replacement although it's an older model made by Dell.

10558987
Well, I like responding to comments quickly, and computer troubles, I get ya :raritywink:

The link doesn't work but I've seen Brotherly Rivalry and it's sequel, it's a pretty good story

10559003
cool & thanks (with my laptop situation)

ah man really...ugh! oh well at least you've heard/know of them.
he hasn't posted up fics in a long while, his main yt channel is gone (the alternate channel still up & active)
i know he's friends with lotus moon but i'm not gonna pry into anything if it's personal.

p.s: the story i wrote love between brothers a dusk shine x spike story (title is misleading on purpose!) this dusk shine in my fic isn't a twilight sparkle lookalike!
if u wanna know more details PM me & i'll reply asap:raritywink:

this message was written yesterday! sorry it took so long:twilightsheepish:

10562303
Heh, that's okay. And yeah, I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while. Your story sounds interesting

10562307
about that postscript...i'm being very serious there are so many details (that i'd love to share with you) surrounding this fic, it's not even funny!

10562356
If you want. Maybe you could pm, but maybe tomorrow? I'm kind of busy atm

10562376
Usually it's the author who pm's me but i've done it a few times:eeyup:
there's no pressure on my end & i completely understand you probably busy with commissions from other people or writing your own stuff.
Please don't misunderstand my wording or take it as being a jab!
that's happen to me before:rainbowlaugh:

10564170
Heh, don't worry, I get it. Feel free to PM me if you like

10564177
Thanks. you'll see the message very soon:raritywink:

10564299
Heh, alright then

Cute also is noling gonna question just how ocellus knew half the cases was not ordered by the queen

10668132
Thanks, and it's not explained because earlier, Pharynx says that the book he was reading from was Ocellus', so it's likely she read it herself

Bro... no.

10677457
And that is supposed to mean...?

10677504
I don't like incest.

Just that.

10677558
Okay, well, I specifically stated in the description that I wrote it for a competition where incest was the main theme. I'm sorry you don't like incest, but I stated in the story's description that it involved incest

10677578
Yeah, it's alright, and, I read the description.

Just wanted to give my input, and I'm realizing how pointless it was.

I shall take my leave.

This was sweet! I loved it! 😊

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