Celestia and Luna: Casting Couch

MCadance: Casting Couch
MLP: FiM
Porn
After getting in a bit of money problems on her end, cadance is approached by a stallion in the mall that promissed her to help her with making it big.
Sex
Anthro
OC
Cadance
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Rabka

Rabka #1 · Nov 24th, 2020 · · ·

Good descriptive scenes and I like that the princesses were willing to put up with all of his commands :)
but they were maybe too easy in the start and the ending was very sudden.

Questionmark x3

Questionmark x3 #2 · Nov 24th, 2020 · 3 · ·

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Thanks for the feedback.

Yeah the full porn logic applies here for me to skip corners. I had the problem in my other fic that i made way too much talking and building up to get to the sexy time. So i tried to limit this one to just porn, with a little less character useage. Thinking back to it, i definitly should have used luna for more dialog. Welp maybe if i continue this one i try to make a bit more challenge to the swaying.

Also for the ending i literally had no other idea how to not write myself against the wall than to end on a cliffhanger that might open up into a new chapter.

Rosegfx

Rosegfx #3 · Nov 25th, 2020 · 2 · ·

Small word of advice; try to not use textspeak like "Tho" and "Thru", just use their full spellings "Though" and "Through".

ShadowBall

ShadowBall #4 · Nov 25th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Fun read, looking forward to the next chapter

Questionmark x3

Questionmark x3 #5 · Nov 25th, 2020 · · 1 ·

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Thank you for the tip. I will try to do that in the future.

Rookie109

Rookie109 #6 · Nov 25th, 2020 · · 2 ·

Want to see more of Luna getting her freak on, my OC and her would ride each other like there’s no tomorrow

X 865

X 865 #7 · Nov 27th, 2020 · · 1 ·

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To add to what Rose said, the difference between "there" and "their".
There is for a place/location (the apartment is over there, across the street).
Their is to indicate ownership (their bank account was in need of more bits).

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