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Luna after years of abuse was banished to the Moon by her sister- Celestia. There she started planning her revenge, but drawbacks and unexpected problems are bound to appear. The biggest problem and at the same time her only light in her whole life was her newly-born daughter - Twilight Sparkle.
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Already love thz story.
Looks Good so far, Looking forward to see where you take this.
shouldn't it be strength? Anyway nice beginning.
pretty good but if i were you i would put the in front of every use of moon also put the in front of every use of sun
in fact, with magic, Princess Luna could easily get oxygen from the moon. even if she could not find deposits of ice on the moon, there is a lot of iron oxide, decomposing it into components with the help of magic should not cost much effort.
let's say that the oxygen obtained in this way will be small, then you can use comets flying by, which in fact consist of frozen ice decomposing which you can get oxygen, hydrogen and water.
the problem is that breathing pure oxygen is life-threatening due to its high oxidizing properties. you need to dilute it with some kind of inert gas (nitrogen or at worst helium). how to get them on the moon, I can not imagine.
another problem is how the exhaled carbon dioxide needs to be converted back to oxygen because doing it with magic is not an option in the long run. ideally, something like a plantation of plants should be created that could solve the problem of lack of food, but this entails a whole mountain of problems with soil terraforming, creating the necessary conditions and protecting which also needs to be solved.
P.S. sorry for my English
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oh i can do that
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Oh I missed it, thanks
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good it the small things like that that stand out the most
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You are completely right. I just was lazy(don't blame me, please), and didn't write it. And one more. Elements weakened her greatly, and she was not nearly in even her 10% power. Thanks for the comment.
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it's just not clear from the first chapter that she is so weak.
10580935
Um yeah.. I'm still learning.
Could you do twilight perspectives wen she leaves the moon
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You mean when she travels between Moon and Equus or what? Because I don't understand.
How was she “falsely” banished to the moon?
Those were the good old days.
What does that mean?
Was it teleported?
I didn’t even know there were different types of magic.
Is Luna still Nightmare Moon?
i Hope she is ready to deal with gravity, For that will be a Pain having to deal with that for the First time in a 1000 years of her life
Ya from moon an eques
Great job
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patience
well you will see in the next chapters
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Yes they are different types of magic
Hint Nightmare Moon and Luna are the ones and same mare. Rest you will see [;
this is pretty good so far, I cant wait to see where you go with this.
I thought in 1000 years Twilight and Luna will turn the moon into a blooming planet with forests and fields. Even if Luna was weakened in the beginning, then her daughter is not, her magic as you have shown was quite strong. If I lived on a lifeless and empty rock for 1000 years, but at the same time possessed magic, I would build a worthy house for myself, and then start terraforming the moon.
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Well Luna was too weak to do this and Twilight didn't know how
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didn't Luna teach magic? In 1000 years you can learn anything.
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YOu are right Luna taught Twilight, but to create something you need how.
You can't just simply create grass or glass from thin air without knowing what was it. It is like creating something stable without concept. It is impossible. You need a pattern. And Luna sadly doesn't know these things, because why? She never expected to be sent to the Moon.
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this explanation worked if they were on the moon for at least 100 years, but they are there as much as 1000 is too much. If they don't know something, then they essentially have no choice to learn through trial and error. Boredom can be a powerful motivator, and when someone as smart as Twilight is bored ...
In principle, everything I said is not important. I’m just upset that we have been shown so little of life on the moon and the interactions between Twilight and Luna.
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I understand. I didn't plan to show much from life on the Moon. More what will happen on Equus and Twilight's adventures.
And you try to draw something you don't know from the story of another. It's hard to reconstruct perfectly, and I don't want overpowering Twilight that fast.
Yellow trees?
Does she mean guest?
I hope she does.
Also, I just realized. You guys remember when rainbow accused twilight of being a spy? Well, I guess in this alternate universe she’s right.
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Yellow trees well.. I don't know what I thought
yes Guest sorry my bad
Mommy luna will have a pretty good time after she returns from the Moon.
Another good chapter.
When will this be updated
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dude, I don't write this is a month old. I can't release a new chapter every day. Sorry.
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and you can see when I released new chapters so next Saturday maybe.
Well this was a very interesting start so Princess Luna is not the only one who got banished to the Moon she has a little one with her name Twilight Sparkle I wonder how this will work I guess we'll find out
So even where does nothing to do on the moon they always find a way to entertain themself and each other which that is pretty cute a mother and daughter having fun with each other so Twilight actually had a plan to go down there before Princess Luna arrives down there this should be very interesting
The irony
Who knows? Maybe someone did.
Is she tryna roast?
Is everypony evil is this alternative world?
I think there’s something wrong with the grammar, here.
Don't worry Twilight Pinkie Pie just trying to prepare a party for you lol
So Twilight finally made it down to Earth and now she has to find a village not before she got attacked by Timberwolves but she got away from them and now she meet up with the first Pony she meets up name Applejack so Twilight told a white lie about where she come from but as Applejack she wants to help Twilight out which that was pretty cool of her to do that after being in the Apple family for a while she finally made it to Ponyville and she made up with another Pony name Pinkie Pie and always she got excited and she ran off to set up a party for her I wonder what's going to happen next now
Well it looks like things are going according to her plans sort of so Twilight find a library but when she went outside it was a mess so she cleaned up everything inside but the mayor showed up and asked her if she could be the librarian because there's nobody there to take care of the library so twilight was hesitated to accept it but she had to have a home to stay so she agrees to be the librarian and with that she finally got a home so she went outside and accidentally bump into Rainbow Dash but now she wants to get her self cleaned up so now she's heading for the boutique to meet up with another Pony name Rarity I wonder how she's going to respond to that I guess we'll find out next time
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oh
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I'm not the best with grammar ];
quando esce il prossimo capitolo
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scusa sta scrivendo appena possibile
10611735
I don't mean to be rude, but you should get someone to help you with that. Your spelling too. Other than that, the story is good.
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no one is perfect my friend.
I'm still learning.
Thanks.
That not really much of a risk.
Just blast them, that’ll make them stop.
Wait, what did she do?
Wait, what?
10632029
she sealed her pegasus magic.
well, the end could be better, I know.
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Wait, that’s possible?
Yea, it probably could have.
è una bella storia che si può continuare
Not Unicron!