Just something I thought of off the top my head. I thought the episodes of a Equestria girls having all that magic being thrown around it would eventually attract unwanted attention so I thought of making a cool fight scene dealing with a bunch of bad guys and throwing in a random character I made off the top my head. i’m just gonna look at this as a reference for other stories I might think of
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Were you using dictation software? I ask because errors such as "mattress" when you wanted "Match was", or "scooter Lou" for Scootaloo look like the kinds of things that crop up when dictation software mis-hears the writer. Have your software read it back for you if it has that function, and/or read it to yourself to catch those problems.
As for the story, I think you cliffhangered the first chapter too soon. I think more info about the monsters would have made it more compelling.
You’re exactly right dude I expect there to be a lot of weird words that don’t belong because I just made this within 40 minutes.
And note to self more detail to bed guys.
Thx dude
Other than the grammar, this is interesting.
What grade is match in?
Well, he put up a better fight than I would have.
I guess I’ll shove him in Sophomore year
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If that was a reply to my comment, I didn’t see it because you didn’t push the reply button.