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From getting their powers, to past heroes... to meeting heroes from another city, this is where all of their adventures are stored. The Principal Trouble only covers what Celestia knows... Chaotic Harmony covers what the heroes POVs of everything is.
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VERY good job on the exchanges and characterizations in these short origin bits in the first chapter. All the reactions to the new powers make a lot of sense for the characters. As for the last one, I'm guessing it was Sunset when she was a baby, which is why you said "MOST" of these were in order, NOT ALL. Though I admit that I could be wrong. Of course, we know Rainbow got super-speed too (which means it would be a power she and Pinkie would BOTH have), but we don't know her additional power just yet, so we will just have to wait and see there.
Definitely going to read chapter Seven of the main story right now. Thanks for getting THAT up too.
Really good job on this latest chapter. Definitely liked the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Obviously, Miss Amazing is Rainbow's alter-ego, Phoenix Star is almost certainly Sunset and Masked Magician and Pup are Twilight and Spike respectively. So now, Silent Anger and Miss Amazing had their first encounter with Discord (and I'm guessing that it's possible "Dennis" is one of Discord's aliases, though the "super-villain-in-training" stuff admittedly sounds odd if that's the case because he is already an old enemy of at least three retired supers, which makes it more likely that "Dennis" is actually the son of one of Discord's aliases).
Anyway, certainly looking forward to more of this.
Again, a really good job on this latest chapter. Definitely appreciated this look at what Sunset was doing while Celestia and Luna were out on their wild goose chase. And, yeah, Sunset's reflection on the difficulty she has had controlling her powers makes a lot of sense, especially concerning losing a lot of foster homes because of people who have names that mean "Chaos" kept coming after her.
And, yeah, I have a feeling that her first guardian was one Wanda Maximoff/The Scarlet Witch, though I admit that I could be wrong.
Anyway, definitely looking forward to more of this.
Really good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. And, yeah, Sunset finding out Pinkie Pie's secret identity and narrowing it down to 50/50 as far as Applejack's identity makes sense (and I also appreciated Sunset trying to avoid accidentally reading the minds of any of the students and the reflection on how the chosen element wielders are teenagers). And Pinkie actually has a third super-power (super-charging sugar, super-speed and now animating balloon animals) - well, given Twilight has at least three as well (telekinesis, teleportation and ice magic), I suppose it makes sense that at least one or two of the other heroes would also have more than two. Plus, yeah, Maud also knows Pinkie's identity, but does a better job in actually keeping the secret than Pinkie does.
And, yeah, to be fair, Spider-Man ALSO had his start as a teenager, as well as seemingly half of the X-Men AND most of the Power Rangers teams. But I digress.
Anyway, really looking forward to more of this.