After the events of Anon-A-Miss, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo became pariahs, and slowly, their isolation takes them to darker and darker places.
Just so you know, I didn't get a notification for this update, nor did the story move up in my Favourites when sorted by recent updates, nor is it showing up when just viewing unread chapters. Fortunately, I checked down and saw it anyway, but if you find that an oddly low number of people have read this one, that might be why.
"The fire krackles as Scootaloo" "The fire crackles as Scootaloo"?
"gonna tell her?” She asks, looking" "gonna tell her?” she asks, looking"?
"continues to prod at the fire pit, I put a hand over" "continues to prod at the fire pit. I put a hand over"?
"Scootaloo goes along with it, laying down on the mattress" "Scootaloo goes along with it, lying down on the mattress"?
Also regarding this chapter: Ouch. And presumably, of course, there's a lot more of that on the way... (I don't plan to stop following the story, though. :))
10784012 Ah, yes, I did notice the timestamps seemed... odd. I'm not sure what's going on there. Well, in the absence of a fix, perhaps short blog posts accompanying future updates would be a good idea? I'm worried about missing one myself, and then there's the thought that many readers might not even know about this one yet.
Just so you know, I didn't get a notification for this update, nor did the story move up in my Favourites when sorted by recent updates, nor is it showing up when just viewing unread chapters. Fortunately, I checked down and saw it anyway, but if you find that an oddly low number of people have read this one, that might be why.
"The fire krackles as Scootaloo"
"The fire crackles as Scootaloo"?
"gonna tell her?” She asks, looking"
"gonna tell her?” she asks, looking"?
"continues to prod at the fire pit, I put a hand over"
"continues to prod at the fire pit. I put a hand over"?
"Scootaloo goes along with it, laying down on the mattress"
"Scootaloo goes along with it, lying down on the mattress"?
Also regarding this chapter: Ouch. And presumably, of course, there's a lot more of that on the way...
(I don't plan to stop following the story, though. :))
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Yeah, for some reason Fimfiction thinks that these chapters were posted in 2020, so it's probably not giving updates, lol.
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10784012
Ah, yes, I did notice the timestamps seemed... odd. I'm not sure what's going on there.
Well, in the absence of a fix, perhaps short blog posts accompanying future updates would be a good idea? I'm worried about missing one myself, and then there's the thought that many readers might not even know about this one yet.