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Warriorcat_mlpluver


Brony, digital artist. Half- cyborg Pegasus. Call me Sweet Apple. I love to write warrior cat and mlp fanfictions!

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Poor Spitfire

To lighting dust ๐Ÿ˜ก

I hope the Doom Slayer gives you a "Friendly" Welcome to Hell, Lightning Dust! :pinkiecrazy:


Lightning Dust ( In her Demon Form): Why do I hear Boss Music????!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฐ


WARNING DEMONS!!!! The DOOM SLAYER has arrived!!!

* Doom Eternal OST - Slayer Gates by Mick Gordon * ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ


Meanwhile in Pony Heaven:


Spitfire: ๐Ÿ˜Ž ๐Ÿฟ ๐ŸŒญ ๐Ÿ• ๐ŸŒฎ ๐Ÿฆ ๐Ÿฅ— ๐Ÿ ๐Ÿ” ๐Ÿน



Edit: Seeing the dislikes up here. I don't know why you don't like my Doom Parody. ๐Ÿ™„

Lightning Dust had it coming, and deserve Karmic Retribution. But, thank you to the one that give me the One Like. ๐Ÿ™‚

This, er... didnโ€™t make a lot of sense to me. I donโ€™t know, it just didnโ€™t really sit well. Left a bad taste in my mouth when I finished reading.

The pacing wasnโ€™t that good. Why was Lightning Dust there? Donโ€™t they have Pegasi guarding the academy? Wouldnโ€™t they have known not to let her get inside? Wouldnโ€™t someone have caught her before she made it that far?

Besides, although some bad things may have happened here and there, I donโ€™t think Dust had any reason to kill any of them. :applejackunsure:

Also, the action isnโ€™t really there for me. Like I said, this goes on pretty fast and I donโ€™t get the time to properly digest any of it.

So...

i.pinimg.com/originals/e1/fe/ea/e1feea2df73447797ac9ebf37b09848a.jpg

We're they having a tomato eating contest, or did they just slurp a bunch of store-branded homemade spaghetti?

Those two need to clean up.

you should read more gore fiction because this wasn't the best job... if this is a troll fic.... then i gave it a troll out of 10...

so before i even read this is a LD shows up goes homicidal and kills people but without any context y

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Wait, was that supposed to be funny?

10521082

Well, Lightning Dust had it coming. Plus, she DID kill Spitfire, and would have hurt other Innocent Ponies like a Potential Serial Killer and Psychopath. Lucky, Rainbow Dash finished her off. And now Lightning Dust is probably in Hell.


P.S. Plus I like Doom, and I love to Punish the Bad and Evil Ponies in these Stories I see.

I havenโ€™t read the story, but the title Picture with the blood and the comments about murder really scream โ€œ this is a mature story than teenโ€ to me.

This needs to be rerated M. This is far too gory for a Teen rating.

10521082
I think it's a troll ๐Ÿ˜‘

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Edit: Seeing the dislikes up here. I don't know why you don't like my Doom Parody. ๐Ÿ™„

Because it isn't funny, tries too hard, and clearly shows your maturity?

Eldorado
Moderator

This definitely should have been rated M. This is a level of gore too excessive for T.

You'll also need to find a new image to use as cover art.

10521456

What the Hell??!! I'm NOT a Troll! :twilightangry2:


10521462

I'm not acting like a "Immature Kid". I'm Over 20 Years after all.


10521473

I'm a bit confused? Are you also upset of my Doom Joke? Or are your defending me with the unfair dislikes?

I feel like lightning dust didnโ€™t suffer enough. Also, this takes a dark turn on why rainbow dash is the captain of the wonderbolts.

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Ok are you mad at something

10521872

You DID accused me as a Troll. :ajbemused:


Unless I misread your comment and you blame someone else. :rainbowderp:

10521881
Okay fine I did jump to conclusions but can you blame me how am I supposed to know to take things serious

OMG. Guys, im so so so sorry! I will rate it M, and im sorry if you hated it.

But, I will stand up for myself. Being honest, we all have our tastes. This was mine, AND IT WAS MY FRICKIN FIRST GOREY STORY OK?! Yeeeeeesssshhhhhhhhh..........................

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It wasnt. It was my first time. IM NEW HERE. But im not mad.

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I didn't hate the Gore. I mean, I played Doom, Mortal Kombat, Gears Of War, God Of War, Etc.. I just glad Lightning Dust had it coming. And Rainbow Dash survived and avenged Spitfire. In fact, I'm NOT even one of those 37 people that Dislike your story. ๐Ÿ™‚

I'm more focused on putting my Doom Parody down here from a while ago.

10520710

And trying to learn on why I have so Many Dislikes. ๐Ÿ™„

10521885

It was a bit serious when you accused me as a Troll. ๐Ÿ™„

In fact, I defended some Authors in here, from the REAL TROLLS!!!! So, being accused as one of those Hateful Jerks harassing some poor Author/Writer in this Website. Does rightfully piss me off. ๐Ÿ˜‘


And considering the fact that despite me making a Harmless and a little funny Doom Parody/Meme on having Lightning Dust Punished for what she has done in this Story. And giving Spitfire a Nice and Peaceful Life in Pony Heaven, and watching Lightning Dust get what she deserves.


For some reason, I get 16 DISLIKES just for Punishing the Psychotic Bitch ( Lightning Dust) for what she had done to Poor Spitfire and Rainbow Dash!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜’

Question: Is the too much Emojis the reason you dislike my Doom Meme Comment, or is it something else?

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Look I'm also not a troll as well ok I'm just answering the question what he was talking about and I don't know about this whole meme thing probably I didn't know what that supposed to mean but sometimes I just don't like killing okay maybe it was a bad idea to come here because now is changed to rated M and I promised myself never read rated M stories no offense to the author I'm sure you worked really hard on it but I have my standards of what I read

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