Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo. Estaxen yando Undómë Tinwë.
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Ahhh! Thank you so much Mel. i'll leave a full comment when i get around to reading it in a bit.
This was really sweet! I did notice characters were explaining their situation to the other character who would obviously know it at points, but I can understand it given you yourself don't have other stories with this couple (IIRC) and your other readers would be unfamiliar.
Hmm, I wonder who this is...
Ahhhh Mel, you spoil me so much. Holy shit this was everything i love in a fic. RariCo, BDSM, 24/7 D/s dynamics, and trans protagonists. Mmm that was masterfully done and i was grinning like an idiot the entire time.
Thank you so so much for this gift, it is...
:chef kiss:
Oh and the proper capitalization. Holy shit.
You need to capitalize the first letters of characters names and the first words of sentences, darling.
How romantic.
Naughty and bombastic.
It reads like they've loved each other like this for a long year.
Something that feels so dear.
And so its isn't so bad.
Just wish there was some source on their relationship a tad.
7.5/10
Romantic and somewhat well written.
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D/s has odd rules - including grammatical ones.
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Out of all the things I have learned about D/S, this is the ONLY one that has disturbed and offended me. Did the English language consent to this?
Nonetheless, I am satisfied with this answer. That makes sense. I shall make another attempt to read the story.
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Ah a fan of MLP and Hellsing Abridged.
A true pony of culture.
I really love the relationship between Coco and Rarity. I’m glad they’re both happy with how things turned out. I’m going to admit that I actually started to tear up when Rarity pulled out the box.