The title
It smells of a threesome
#approved

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Foursome, I guess, technically? Although 3/4 ponies there think that it's a threesome.

Is she going to just hide or will she make a move towards the Griffin?

Smells like sequel potential

10560332
I don't know ... seems like it would be kind of awkward now.

10560434
Every last one of my stories ... I just don't know any other way to end a story.

Needs one more chapter, at least

Needs an epilogue.

This was awesome but this needs a epilogue where Starlight and Trixie do find out it was her who got them pregnant before all three of them in the future get pregnant with Sunburst baby's

10560634
It would be. That could make a great comedy

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Just when I think I've gotten out, they pull me back in!

10560910
But ... that's a lot of writing and not a lot of sex...

10560946
"Do you wanna go out with me? Oh yeah, and I've been spying on you while you masturbate. And also while you fuck other girls."

10561009
Just a little something with some hot, pregnant sex.
Possibly hyper pregnant, given the oviposition situation, but I'm fine either way.

10561009
Your also forgetting the huge amount of drama and trust issues but it plays into my theory he knew she was there

10560634
Same here lol though it would be hot if shes busted banging them and asked ehy you wet abd baked abd smell of cum

10561009
Gallus I know.
But how
I dont own blue soap or a blue pillow.

Gallus collection (harem)

10561009
But she did impregnet his secret herd Sunburst deserves not only payback in getting her pregnant but also a Chance at getting his herd pregnant himself.

The fact that the three teachers is an OT3 of mine makes this all the more juicy. Awesome fic, hope we get to return to this idea in the future

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Me too! It's pretty much up to my Patreon supporters! ^.^

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this needs more chapters!

10565469
That's up to my Patreon supporters now.

This was over-the-top credibility-breakingly irresponsible of Ocellus. If she hadn't been confiscated, she would have been doing this to Smolder and Silverstream! And they would have gotten pregnant! This wasn't even a deviation from plan, except for being able to hold it, which, you know, you really can't count on.

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I mean ... that also sounds like a fun story...

10570709
as a story, maybe. But as a plan of action, even for a horny teen, it's no good at all.

I wish they had released more chapters, the fic was very good

10642199
Heh, yeah... Sadly, my time is limited. Only so much I can write.

10643002
Well maybe in the future we'll get a sequel, if you get more time. Maybe more fun adventures of Ocellus, or a chapter about those eggs being birthed and causing some sort of situation.
In any case this was a fun read! very nice.

10654369
Well, if the patreon supporters ask for it...

11090251
how much for a chapter where this happens with her friends

11135419
You mean as a commission?

All my commission information is here.
Since I'm really busy and my waiting list is way too long right now, my current base price is $440 per 1000 words, though SubscribeStar supporters can get discounts to get that lower.

11135964
440?! jesus thats ex[pensive for 1000 words (i dont know most peoples rate but damn) (( totally not saying that it isnt worth it with how much ive read the last chapter its definantly worth it)

11139523
Heh, yeah. I've made it extra expensive right now in order to reduce the length of my waiting list.
That's how high I have to make it in order to see any real reduction in how many people are asking for commissions! ^.^
The price will go down gradually as the waiting list gets shorter.

11140627
imma definantly comission something either by subing to you (which ive done as of yesterday) or waiting for the price to drop

I just now realize that Ocellus could have transformed into a gnat or ant and crawled out.

11247519
Could be a hazardous strategy, though. Might get casually swatted by somepony.

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Nah ponies are pretty forgiving creatures. May be hard to spot anyway.