During a trip to the bookshop for the Fifth Edition of the Ogres and Oubliettes GM Guide, Luster Dawn encounters a mysterious but friendly pony that is trying to remain incognito in Ponyville lest she gets swarmed by dozens of admirers.
And given this pony’s lineage and acts of heroism, could anyone really blame her for wanting to keep her identity a secret when she’s trying to do mundane things?
Flurry Heart and Luster Dawn vector belongs to EJLightning007arts.
Part of the Flurry and Luster's Comical Chronicles series.
- I've Made A Huge Mistake
- When Flurry Met Lussy
- The Bewitching Bell Campaign
- Flurry's Very Early Christmas
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That title is giving the wrong impression for the story. The story is awesome to be sure. Just the title is a little... Off.
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True, but it is about Luster Dawn and Flurry Heart encountering each other. Couldn't think of a more apt title if I wanted to.
It's a pity that I can't think of any nicknames for Luster that rhymed with "Sally".
This just makes me want to see a Luster Dawn X Flurry Heart romance story even more.
I'd honestly like to see this play out. Both the O&O game and this friendship. There is so much greatness waiting to be taped into right here.
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Oh, trust me. I'm working on a follow-up. Maybe even more stories after that one.
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Good to hear. Will be looking forward to it.
If you listen, you can hear Twilight performing the most epic facehoof in the history of Equestria at Luster's thinking.
I love it by the way.
Heh. Not bad. OC insert amused me (I'm guessing all those events he mentioned were in previous stories of yours?), and the conversation between the two sounds pretty realistic. I'd love to see Flurry GM-ing an O&O game; my GMs (yeah, two) can get pretty sadistic sometimes, and I can just imagine Flurry going from kind, graceful princess to "YOU HAVE FAILED YOUR FINAL SAVING THROW! DEATH TO THE CLERIC! MWAHAHAH!"
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Yes and no. While he has been shown to be stalking Twilight in prior stories, I don't think there's been a story where he decided to stalk Cadence instead and faced the wrath of Shining Armor for his troubles.
Though that would have definitely been entertaining to write.
Good idea.
So I'm a bit lost here. In Dungeons and Discords, Pinkie joined in as well. Was that just a one time thing here for her? Or is Discord pulling some genderbending shennanigans here?
I wouldn't be shocked. But being Pinkie being a mom probably has something to do with it too. Just curious.
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Oops, I forgot Pinkie joined in as well.
Let's go with genderbending shenanigans involving Pinkie's O&O character.
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It's probably a much safer bet that, since Pinkie became a mom, she hasn't been able to join like she used to. R63 is the poor man's excuse (if that was the case, Rainbow and Flurry would be dudes as well).
Just saying.
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I'd love to see more of these two. Also look on the bright side, just one more month and this terrible year will finally be over.
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True but I sense next year will be worse than this one. After all, people were glad to see 2019 go and hoped 2020 would be good. Next thing you know, 2020 was worse than 2019.
But on a more positive note, I'm currently working on a sequel to this story:
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Comedy
- Slice of Life
With Flurry Heart as the GM, Luster and her ragtag bunch of friends engage in an O&O campaign of silly proportions.It was great loved it. And saved !!