After a major accident at Kyle Blueblood's party, Vinyl, Octavia, Lyra, Bon (Bon Bon), Dixie (Derpy) and Haven (Dr Whooves) find themselves on the run. While Haven says that his lawyer uncle back home might be able to get them out of this, that won't matter if they don't get there before the police, Blueblood with his family's force and maybe even some civilians get to them first.
What will this journey have in store for these six friends? Will they find out more about themselves and each other, and just what happened at that party? One thing's for sure, this is a trip they will never forget.
Chapters (3)
I rather like the cast of characters you've chosen as the wayward protagonists. I might be biased on that, though, since the group contains four particular favorites of mine.
From a technical standpoint this was some pretty solid writing for the most part, with the repetition of certain words in a couple of spots being the worst "offenders."
I think there's a word missing here.
Looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds!
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Thank you for the feedback! Hoping to improve myself as the chapters go on!
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(jk thanks for pointing that out)
I smell magic in the air! Or maybe it's barbecue..? Time will tell, time will tell.
I noticed in a few spots, like the example above, you slipped a bit between past and present tense.
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Yeah the past and present tense thing is something I'm slowly working myself out of, so I ask y'all bear with me as I improve!
As for the magic, well....
