Not Just Ponies: Hawk Mountain Halloween

Halloween arrives in the 'Not Just Ponies' world. Bram and his dragon friend Cynthia plan to take human and Equestrian children on a 'ghost tour' of local haunted hotspot Hawk Mountain. But at the last moment Cynthia has to drop out and it's all on Bram. But he'll find a way to keep them all entertained, right?

Done in Alex Warlorn's 'Not Just Ponies' setting.

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redmar

redmar #1 · Jan 9th, 2021 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 1 ·

I'm very interested in learning what the dragons are doing and why they were asked not to interfere. I suspect that the appearance of Sombra is connected to Nightshade's planned surprise.
Also I think it's a shame that mine is the first comment so far.

redmar

redmar #2 · Jan 9th, 2021 · 1 · 1 · Chapter 2 ·

This was a great story and enjoyed it a lot. I suspected the reason the dragons had to go was connected to the cartel but I wonder if there aren't better reasons why they were asked not to interfere than the ones Bram was given. Superior Spell really is a moron and Hot Trot is not much better they're lucky they didn't have a huge accident with broken bones.

Ardashir

Ardashir #3 · Jan 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Glad you like it, and thanks for the comments.

I suspected the reason the dragons had to go was connected to the cartel but I wonder if there aren't better reasons why they were asked not to interfere than the ones Bram was given.

There may well be, but I'm unsure if I could write that story. This is a mostly light-hearted universe (despite the, y'know, impending extinction/transformation of all humanity). The story of the takedown of the cartel dragon would likely be very dark, especially if I wrote it now.

Ardashir