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Timothy1509


I have been writing Twirax stories since 2019.

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One day, the mane six, Starlight, CMC'S and Spike have all decided to go to the changeling Kingdom to pay a visit to their friend Thorax to see how he is doing while he is running his Kingdom. During that time, Thorax has made a slight request for them that will terrify them completely.

New story! This story is requested by the user Chazkopa. I hope you all will enjoy it!

Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro. And the coverart I am using for the story belongs to bokkathfoxrabbit on Deviantart.
Here's the link to it
https://www.deviantart.com/bokkathfoxrabbit/art/Changeling-CMC-and-Spike-Headshots-822101710

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 34 )

I’m anxious for the next chapter

10508940
Sure, and I bet that you will love it. Even though I don't have that much ideas in my head.

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Try listening to music. That always helps me

10509525
Okay I guess, thank you for your counsel.

Nice for my request story. I like the favorite part of Thorax guide the mane six, Starlight, Spike and the CMC.

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Glad you enjoyed it buddy, the next chapter will also be released today.

Listening music is a good idea it makes your mind go to strang places well anyways of to a great start my friend let's keep it that way

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Okay I guess, and thank you for your counsel.

Sweet chapter and they talked about Chrysalis.

Another chapter going well.

I like the part Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Applebloom and Spike will do it.

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Yes I know, also, which part of the story did you find it very hysterical?

You should really try writing longer chapters with deeper description and detail. This is a good concept, that is the only flaw I see

"Okay here's how it works guys." Thorax told them "I just need to pour this cream on top of the CMC'S and Spike, after the cream has been poured, a raccoon will eventually appear and wrap them in it, and after a week, they will appear out of their cocoons as changelings." He stated.

better fix that 'raccoon' into cocoon

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Thank you for correcting my mistake. I am using my phone to write the story which is sometimes very difficult.

My favorite part is Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Applebloom and Spike is inside of their green cocoons. But not only that, I like Thorax wore a laboratory coat and safety goggles first.

Nice chapter and nice transformation complete for Spike and the cmc.

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Indeed Chazkopa, indeed.

Fabulous chapter.

My favorite part is Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Spike all spread their shelled wings and hovered upwards.

And the best parts is Scootaloo can finally fly.

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Glad you enjoyed it pal.

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"My fellow subjects, I would like to introduce to you the new members of the Changeling Hive." Thorax told them "Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Spike." He finished.

You missed Apple Bloom.

But will the mane six let their families know about this and Princess Celestia and Princess Luna as well?.

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You missed Apple Bloom.

Thank you for finding my mistake.

But will the mane six let their families know about this and Princess Celestia and Princess Luna as well?.

Yes they will, it will happen in one of the upcoming chapters.

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"Is that you?" Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Applejack and Rainbow Dash asked in unison.

You missed a spot; it's Twilight. And you're welcome.

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Oh, thank you for finding another one of my mistakes.

Poor Apple Bloom, first to fly, left off the introduction

Nice. Ocellus think Spike and the cmc are cool as changelings.

Great. Ocellus was impressed of Spike and the cmc's new form.

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Indeed Chazkopa, indeed.

first comment i think lol

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a raccoon lol
you should have kept that, it would make the story interesting

it will turn into a raccoon

"My fellow subjects, I would like to introduce to you the new members of the Changeling Hive." Thorax told them "Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo and Spike." He finished.

apple bloom isnt in the introduction

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