• Member Since 7th May, 2012
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Amethyst_Crystal


G1 Twinkle-Eyed Pony fan enjoys writing stories about G4 Twilight and/or Starlight

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In which two kind care-taker ponies have some tea in the cold of an autumn evening, explore their own identities, with one shy and withdrawn, the other assertive and confrontational.

Exploring the relationship between the two gentle ponies with a 'dark side', something I've wanted to do more since Starlight's Five Scrolls diary chapters awhile ago.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

I dont like it
It's too short

Interesting. Assuming that Fluttershy was talking about her "darkness", she was talking about how she was feeling when she was being bullied as a filly, this is something that isn't explored that often. Both Starlight and Fluttershy was insecure about something that happened to them as fillies, but reacted very differently to it.

In fact, as "Party of One" showed, Pinkie has this bit of darkness in her and some insecurity too, but I've yet to see a story explore that with Starlight's insecurity like this story did.

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Thanks, I definitely feel like Fluttershy and Starlight have a lot in common, especially after Starlight joined the mane six.

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That's fine, I like writing short conversation stories. There might be another chapter some other day.

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