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The Red Parade


One for the rocks and one for the scary.

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Following the hells of a horrific accident in Ponyville, four ponies get into an elevator in Canterlot. Please, stand clear of the doors.


Heavily edited and revised entry to Seer's Spookfest, a contest hosted on the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Server. Happy Halloween!

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I don't know how no one has commented on this yet - I thought this was a fantastic piece in the contest. It kind of reminded me of FNaF in a way. I always like a good revenge story. Nice job, Red.

Perhaps a bit short for my taste, but it sure packed a punch nonetheless.
Great read. Chilling and atmospheric.
I wonder if the other parties responsable for the accident will be punished, too..

Greetings. Your reading has been completed and can be found below. I hope you enjoy.

Happy Halloween!

Nice creepy story! The visuals were amazing, and there was a nice sense of dread. Cheerilee makes for a good vengeful ghost.

Nice creepy story! The visuals were amazing, and there was a nice sense of dread. Cheerilee makes for a good vengeful ghost.

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