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The Red Parade


Cars are still parked outside. If the rapture had happened, why was it unrecognizable? Why was the sky blue? Why did no one tell me? Do these things not announce themselves?

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Following the hells of a horrific accident in Ponyville, four ponies get into an elevator in Canterlot. Please, stand clear of the doors.


Heavily edited and revised entry to Seer's Spookfest, a contest hosted on the Quills and Sofas Speedwriting Server. Happy Halloween!

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I don't know how no one has commented on this yet - I thought this was a fantastic piece in the contest. It kind of reminded me of FNaF in a way. I always like a good revenge story. Nice job, Red.

Perhaps a bit short for my taste, but it sure packed a punch nonetheless.
Great read. Chilling and atmospheric.
I wonder if the other parties responsable for the accident will be punished, too..

Greetings. Your reading has been completed and can be found below. I hope you enjoy.

Happy Halloween!

Nice creepy story! The visuals were amazing, and there was a nice sense of dread. Cheerilee makes for a good vengeful ghost.

Nice creepy story! The visuals were amazing, and there was a nice sense of dread. Cheerilee makes for a good vengeful ghost.

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