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Empty Vessel

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When a changeling thrown from the Royal Wedding loses the ability to store love, how can he survive?

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applezombi

applezombi #1 · Oct 31st, 2020 · 1 · ·

Good start. I'm interested.

I'm a sucker for meta theater, so the story-within-a-story thing is fun for me. I also like that you acknowledge the trope about changeling stories without it becoming a distracting 4th wall break.

OrionWolf

OrionWolf #2 · Oct 31st, 2020 · · ·

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Thanks! I have some fun ideas going forward. And I usually dislike the 4th wall break as well, so I'm trying to have it framed as a completely within Equestria story. Same as in the real world where people write about big events, I was thinking the same would apply in Equestria. :)

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #3 · Nov 1st, 2020 · 1 · ·

Hmm this is a very interesting story so far so he's basically telling story about his view after the royal wedding this should be very interesting

OrionWolf

OrionWolf #4 · Nov 1st, 2020 · 1 · ·

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I'm glad it's interesting to you! I'll be adding more chapters soon. :) It's nice to see people enjoying the premise.

RDT

RDT #5 · Dec 24th, 2020 · 1 · ·

Are the ratings broken for this story? Because I upvoted months ago and the vote count still hasn't updated.

OrionWolf

OrionWolf #6 · Dec 25th, 2020 · · ·

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I don’t know, I show it as having 9 votes, so I’ll say yours is one of them. ^^ and thank you so much for voting and enjoying the first chapter. Have a wonderful Christmas!