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When a mysterious being is found in Equestria with no signs of its origin, what will happen to it? What will happen during its life trying to live in a world full of ponies?


Well, here I am, the king of not finishing things. New story again. Kinda just lost it for my other two, so here's this!:pinkiehappy:

Inspired by Soaring on Little Wings

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

I get the first like on this story. So far so good.

Well, here I am, the king of not finishing things.

You may be the king of not finishing things, but I was the Emperor of not finishing things
I had more than 7 unfinished stories and more on the way.

Ooooh, I can't wait to see where this story goes!! It sounds really interesting! :D

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Dang, gotta step up my game :rainbowlaugh:

This chapter feels stilted.
My mind is wilted.
They find a child and take it in?
Without thought or mind, they just shove it thin?
And it isn't even a pony.
It feels repetitive without a story.
Writing is somewhat decent though.
6/10

Now I really have to pick up on my own AU involving a human child of my own.

So far so good! Keep it up!

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