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"Would it kill the two of you to turn on the air conditioner from time to time?!"

doesn't an air conditioner make you colder

I will watch your story with great interest!

10500595
No, but if it's as cold as insinuated, it might make you warmer? Maybe? Author got everything else right.

10500605
No problem.

I'm really not sure how to feel about this story. The premise is very creative. I feel like it could become a gripping, thought-provoking tale about child-on-child sex abuse. But it runs the risk of becoming a very cringey, terrifying story that will make a lot of people feel repulsed. Foalcon is always a touchy subject, but especially when it involves Cozy.

10500606
Some air conditioning units work as reversible heat pumps, which provide heat in the winter.

"OMG! She raped Snowdrop!"

"YOU BASTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

That's right: this is me being utterly infuriated at such a concept being put into creation.

10501362
No dark tag.:twilightsmile:

It's Cozy, sure, but rape...? :derpyderp1:

Nah, this is a romance. I want there to be a bit more meaning in this story even though it's also gonna be cloppy, but cute at the same time. There's only one chapter at this point in time, and in it, the two of them haven't even met yet.:twilightsheepish:

Anyways, read what you like.:pinkiesmile:

good start so far, but wow already 40% dislike WTF! . for what reason xD

cozy's bratty behavior is rather milder then i expeckted, can get only worse over time ^^

havent seen a story with snowdrop in a long time, looking forward to read more :)

10501581
Yes, Cozy's behavior is supposed to be perceived as bratty. Also she doesn't have her cutie mark yet. Gives you a good idea of where the story is in the timeline.

now i wonder what reason cozy had do nock out a colt ^^

such a nughty young filly xD

JWR

I'm morbidly curious about this one.

Wow, I somehow missed this. Should have read it earlier, I even saw the cover art like a week ago offsite.

The next day had already arrived, and that morning, Cozy Glow could be found within her house, and just down the hall. If somepony were to listened closely enough, they'd hear the filly's sounds of strain and agitation coming from inside her closed and locked bedroom door.

Think you meant to say. If somepony were to listen closely enough

HOW DARE SHE!
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Continue!
???: IM SORRY WHAT!?

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