There is one lesser-known tale of the two sisters from the olden days of Equestria, far back before Nightmare moon. When the two Princesses had used the elements of harmony to banish countless dark entities from their world. about a monster who lived in a stone book, and the poor creature it had corrupted to do it's bidding. Each being was different but all were dealt with by almost the exact same method, the Elements of Harmony. But the Elements didn't always do the same thing to every villain it came across.
Forced to be reborn over and over again with his memories intact, earning redemption has never been more painful.
Chapters (1)
Is the name Inkblot or Ink Blot? It seems to change once or twice.
You have a few paragraphs that are missing a blank line in between them.
I prefer when the dialogue is in the start, end or both in a paragraph. As in...
descriptive text <dialogue> or;
<dialogue> descriptive text or;
<dialogue> descriptive text <dialogue>
But this is a formatting preference of mine that I think makes it easier to read.
I'm very interested in the idea. I really like the way the scene with the mother finding him in the forest turned out, the concept of an adult mind stuck inside the brain of a child. Not to mention the idea of being reborn into a newborn child, remembering past lives.
Another thing you did that drew my attention is that you gave Everfree a reason to be named as such. This is something that I like.
And then there are these lines...
Little jerk, LOL.
As you can see, I liked this story, independent of what I told you before. And yes, It is worth continuing. I like the concept for the main character and his situation and certainly want to know what happens.