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Nice work, you are amazing at writing.
Can't wait to see where this goes!
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Ouch. But thank you. I'll get to correcting that in a bit.
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I'm decent at best. I can't seem to catch my own errors sometimes. As fox has been pointing out. This was bad this time around.
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Another will drop next week. So no more chapters for you.
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Heh okay then. If you don't like it don't read it. I get that my story is not everyone's cup of tea.
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You know what that was unkind. Sorry dude I just had a very bad day.
I promise you one thing. Orion is not going to be an anime protag. He is going to get hurt. He is going to suffer. I am gonna be a dick to my own creation.
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Money?
Ah, "my story". I understand now.
Very enjoyable. Poor Orion. A month of no magic and community service.
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Its all good.
I just like to comment my reaction to things as I have them.
Honestly, im more worried that you are going to purposefully gimp him. Lol
Just let the story flow how you want it to.
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I'm not gonna gimp him. He's just going to have a bad time. See the universal law of consequences is going to start catching up to him. And while his skill with artificing is awesome. It's not gonna be able to meet all his needs.
Damn this is awesome! Consider this amazing story liked and favorited.
I do have one quick question. Will Orion be staying at the orphanage until he's an adult again or will he run away if he thinks Celestia is close to discovering he's the enchanter?
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While the main plot line is set I have allowed for flexibility in the storyline itself. At this point yes he will likely stay. But then again the way the story takes me in between main story points may be subject to change. I like writing like that because I get to go on the ride with you all.
So what penalty did Blueblood's sons recieve? Kinda unfair if you ask me, especially after she said that he was not entirely to blame.
Why is she so shocked that he honestly wants to include other races in his mannerisms? It's like she's saying to herself, "I've been sheltering my little ponies for centuries now. How did one of them manage to get so woke on my watch?!"
Made this account just to throw some praise cause goddamn you know how to weave a story without wasting the readers time with a bunch of unnecessary horseshit or dry boring world building that goes on far too long. It's been a long time since I've read a story this good after only 6 chapters of it. I hope this level of quality continues throughout the rest of the story and it's sequel. HiE's have always been crap shoots but I'm glad I gave this one a go. Top stuff man.
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Ummm thank you. That is flattering to say the least. I'm glad you like it. My writing does get better and I attempt to build the world with the story as best I can.
Thank you once again and glad to have you along for the ride!