For as long as time remembers, the old house on the hill has gone unnamed. Time doesn’t remember who lived there, and time doesn’t want to.
Whilst looking up at the sky, one human is surprised by a change in the night, and thrust down from the heavens, is a creature unlike any he has ever laid eyes on before. However, neither of the two has any understanding on how such circumstances will change their lives and feelings forever.
Not clop, but, heavy romance.
Inspired by a number of songs on my 'melancholy' playlist - most namely; InMe's 'Her Mask'.
Chapters (2)
I love you, sexually.
I want your body.
Wow, that was amazing. I especially like the epilogue, “Her mask, haunts dreams at night.”
This line in particular sounds a bit creepy, rarity is watching me!
That picture has interested me... Bravo
I am normally disposed to dislike anything that warns me up front that it's Non-Clop -- not that I'm a big fan of clop, as I usually find that sort of thing distracting -- but this was so elegantly constructed that I'm wishing I could give it two thumbs up.
I don't understand the epilogue. Was it all a dream?
A few errors; for example you use "starred" instead of "stared" a couple times. Yeah, your writing could use a touch-up by a careful editor, but hey - pobody's nerfect!
Anyways, this was well thought of. A really pretty story, wistful and enchanting in a creepy sort of way.
You better continue writing! I'd love to see more of this sort of material, especially if it were free of errors.
Amazing.
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Nothing new there, then!
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As I said, this was based off of a song. Those lines are lyrics!
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I like the picture too!
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Thank you, I think that is one of the kindest comments I have ever got!
The reason for the 'non' clop part is that I have also written a seprate spin off, one that involves clop. I just prefer this version, so I posted it instead.
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If you're really interested, you can PM me and I'll talk you through my thoughts on the matter. I'd prefer not to say it aloud in the comments.
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Thanks dude, I'll look into it! This is the first time I have posted anything without anyone or even myself really giving it a second read.
And enchanting and creepy was what I was going for!
... Time to fix shit!
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Thank you my good man!
.....i was half expecting (sadi)rarity's eyes to flash red...............the epilogue made me more sad than creeped out....<.<
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Haha, is that a good thing!? I was going for sad/mysterious, but people are getting 'creepy' vibes!
Well, I'm good with that. People seem to be liking it!
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considering where that cover image originated from......red eyes means immeninet torture gtfo now..........>.>......now i'm wondering what sweetie was doing during this.......heh bittersweet endings
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Haha, you follow that Tumblr too? Haha, yeah, it's taken out of context, but... well, it fit the mood!
And as far as this Fic is concerned; there is no Sweetie Belle! ...Which is sad...
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-_-.......i didn't even know about it till i saw that image link......>.>......i read through both sweetie's n rarity's entire tumblir within the hour......so yea
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Haha, so I also brough you a good Tumblr! Huzzah!
Its is really good to see romance nowadays that isn't clop based, good job. The only thing that disappoints me about this story is that you allocated time to writing this instead of "Saccharine Arcadia".
Regardless it was good, keep up the great work.
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Haha, well, they're radically different aren't they?
Anyhow, I wrote this quite a while back so... it didn't really cut into the time too much. Besides, I had this as an idea for quite a while, and it kinda forced me to stop writing SacchArc for a bit. It was creating a block, and after I got it out, I was fine again.
And to be honest, this story started out as clop and I wrote a clop section of it. But, I liked this version SO much more, and kept it instead.
Also, you'll be happy to know that right this very instant, I am writing more SacchArc, but, as I said in my blog, it'll take ages to finish. 5-9K chapters don't appear overnight, and I write slow as fuck!
Glad you enjoyed this too though, dude!
You are my hero. No lie.
Bravo, good pony. Bravo.
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Haha, you like it, then?
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supremely.
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One giant thank you to you, Sir!
This was beautiful!
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Thank you, I try my best!
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"Dean.."
I'm interested to know what happened to Rarity. "Ran away"?? Ran away from what in her old life?
I seek answers!