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Someday, I'll stop writing silly comedy stories. However, today isn't "someday".

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A day after Ember visited Ponyville and claimed they look the same, Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer pondered if she had a point. To ensure they never get mixed-up again, the two mares formed a plan to stand out from each other more.

They should have gone over the details of how they would do it more.

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Oh lord, that was hilarious. :rainbowlaugh:

Starlight and Twilight lowered back down on all fours and Twilight answered, “Uh, nope. We didn’t even throw down any jank spells today.”

“‘Jank’? Why are you talking like that?” Spike asked. “Same question to you, Starlight.”

This reminds me of the inner-city Hogwarts parody.

This is absurd almost to the point of unbelievability, but ghetto urban Twilight and Starlight is just too good to not like. :rainbowlaugh:

Now that is some quality content right there :) Really nice and lovely to read!

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Glad to hear you think so!:twilightsmile:



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Believe it or not, it was a little closer to the unbelievable during most of editing. A late tweak made it a little more believable that it could happen in canon. Either way, gotta love urban Twilight and Starlight:rainbowlaugh:



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All right, glad to see you enjoyed it!

Ri2
Ri2 #5 · Nov 3rd, 2020 · · ·

I'm surprised Rarity didn't snap and murder them.

I like it already just for the premise alone. Damn it Ember, look what you've done. Although, maybe we should be thanking her for this chain of events.

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Thanks and glad to see you enjoyed it!



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If they had kept it up, Rarity might have laid down some smacks on Twilight and Starlight, if to try to snap them out of it.



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That's a good point. We should both thank and blame Ember for this!

I'M DYING! this was hilarious!!!

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Glad to hear you thought it was hilarious! Not about the dying part, of course:rainbowlaugh:

This comment is a W.I.P.

“H-h-hey there my peeps! Twilight Double ‘O’ Sparkle is here!” A voice from behind called out.

omfg

“Um...thank you?” Rarity rubbed the top of her head confusingly. “I think? Was that even a compliment?”

My thoughts exactly.

Twilight continued to rap (kinda) to herself as her friends stared at her, feeling both concern and fear. The pigs in the pig pin all inched toward the side of their den that was the furthest from Twilight, keeping their eyes on her. Those are the smartest pigs this underpaid narrator has ever seen.

I don't pay you to make jokes about your employment, get back to work! Jk, jk...

“Twilight wouldn’t try to hurt us in that...state, right?” Rainbow slapped her cheek. “No, of course not! She wouldn’t hurt us, even if she finally snapped!”

Not on purpose, but remember the time she went crazy about cleaning everything and made you guys slip and bathe?

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Not on purpose, but remember the time she went crazy about cleaning everything and made you guys slip and bathe?

That would depend on if that's a callback to my "Twilight's Bookless Week (Celestia Help Us!!)" story or not. if so, Rainbow wouldn't remember it, since this isn't part of my Eric Reedverse continuity.

Though, if he were there, Eric's reaction would probably be something like "Twilight, how bad did you lose it this time? You're purple, not black!" :rainbowlaugh:

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Ah, i see. Yes, it was a callback to that lol.

The rest of my comment:

Pinkie’s jaw dropped to the ground. She yanked a pair of glasses from her mane and put them on. Twilight and Starlight remained in their unusual outfits, so Pinkie pushed her glasses back in her mane. “Okay, that lazy writer that REALLY needs a girlfriend won’t like it, but I’m going out-of-character to ask ‘What?’ and ‘The f**k ?!’”

How did you let Pinkie Pie onto you? I'm docking you a weeks pay for this... Again, jk! Sorry... :fluttercry:

If by ‘very absurd’, then yes. Now that I think of it, how we were talking did sound...weirder than it did than when those, uh, humans talked that way.”

"If by that you mean 'very absurd'..." Sorry, I'm an editor, pls don't kill me :fluttercry:

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If by ‘very absurd’, then yes. Now that I think of it, how we were talking did sound...weirder than it did than when those, uh, humans talked that way.”

This time, it wasn't one of those errors I let slip through editing. I've seen that type of phase sometimes spoken that way, so it was done on purpose. If it was in narration, I would have had it be more grammatically accurate.

How did you let Pinkie Pie onto you? I'm docking you a weeks pay for this...

Both that whiny narrator and I know Pinkie Pie does what she feels like, so we don't even try to stop her if she wants to go out-of-character:rainbowlaugh:

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This time, it wasn't one of those errors I let slip through editing. I've seen that type of phase sometimes spoken that way, so it was done on purpose. If it was in narration, I would have had it be more grammatically accurate.

Ah, I see. :twilightsmile:

Both that whiny narrator and I know Pinkie Pie does what she feels like, so we don't even try to stop her if she wants to go out-of-character:rainbowlaugh:

Lmao:rainbowlaugh:

Pinkie’s jaw dropped to the ground. She yanked a pair of glasses from her mane and put them on. Twilight and Starlight remained in their unusual outfits, so Pinkie pushed her glasses back in her mane. “Okay, that lazy writer that REALLY needs a girlfriend won’t like it, but I’m going out-of-character to ask ‘What?’ and ‘The f**k ?!’”

Was that a dragon ball abridged reference I just saw????

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Not a direct reference, but it was inspired by one of Vegeta's lines in part 2 of DBZA episode 60.

Okay, would anyone care to explain the f**k?!

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