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GRYFFINDOR123456


Hi, I'm GRYFFINDOR123456 and I'm legally an adult. I love my little pony, Equestria Girls and G5 and I also love Harry Potter, Wednesday and Barbie!

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This story is a sequel to now we must rewrite the stars


Sunset Shimmer and her friends are compliling a yearbook. But Wallflower is jealous of Sunset. Sci-Twi is in love with Sunset. Will Sci-Twi remember Sunset? Or will something else happen?


"Happiness will be found, even in the darkest of times. If only one remembers to turn on the light." Albus Dumbledore

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 2 )

Oh boy. You have failed on one thing in particular, that doesn't help the story at all. WHY are the chapter so short? It doesn't speak of good writing when they are.

For crying out loud, the last two chapters could be one chapter by itself. It only feels like they're split up to make it to the 1,000 word minimum requirement for a story to be published.

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Well, actually, if you read any of my fanfiction.net stories, 1000 words is about an average for a story(sometimes 700 if a short Greatest Showman or Annie story). Also, I wanted to split the 2 scenes up, as the last chapter is a happy one and and the previous is rather sad(that’s when Wallflower and Sunset have an argument, which I left out, but the song is still there) and for the final chapter, it’s kind of the climax and the epilogue(as I said earlier) and so I wanted to put a Twilight/Sunset moment(in fact, that is what the entire story is based on) and the big moment we’ve been waiting for... love!
Also, the special is 44 minutes.
I’m not great at writing MLP EG fanfics on its own, but I love writing HP/MLP EG fanfics and Beauty and the Beast ones! If I can, I will post Rainbow Dash’s Adventures at Hogwarts
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Thanks for the comment!

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