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now this is epic
Totally unrelated, but the title reminded me of this song, for reasons apparent to listeners:
Actual feedback to come later.
Okay, if only for this line:
You get a thumbs-up. A nice bit of sex and parasitic infiltration is just a bonus.
That was great! Though the ending felt just a little abrupt. I would have enjoyed a longer induction. Maybe next chapter?
Also, I love the cover-art with those green eyes. Subtle but menacing.
This is very fun so far, I can't wait to see what will happen next with this.
Come on, Bonbon! You can catch up!
At least their having fun.
Imagine if the Hive's goal was to just infiltrate the government in order to do nothing but cause petty bureaucratic obstructions for the Element Bearers.
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That's honestly hilarious
A small thrill of triumph there at the end., :D I wonder if that's how she'll lure Rarity in to get taken over...
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Can that be an alt ending? lol
I love this story.
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Glad to hear it
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would happen if the changelings were german
"Sorry Miss Sparkle, but you need to wait atleast 3-4 weeks for that application to be verified. There is nothing you can do, do make that progess faster."
It's great to see a new chapter of this story, and our first element of harmony turned!