Pinkie Pie hasn't seen or been to a Vinyl Scratch show since she was known as Pinkamina. Now living comfortably in Ponyville, she finally gets a chance to go to another and the result quickly becomes much more than just a fun night out. When confronted with a life-changing decision, the pink party pony must choose between her close Ponyville friends or the life the always dreamed of.
Based on the song 'The Pinkie Pie Style', by Pony Archie.
((Here's the URL; the link wasn't working for some reason. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B24F_kYcxqM ))
Some people have been complaining about Vinyl's eyes... I've actually seen them red or blue, and I prefer blue, so...I guess I can change it if people really want me to, but I don't think it's a problem.
A few notes on the story... Pinkie is basically going to raves.
And the ages are kind of going in years... I'm putting Pinkie at about 26 right now. In the prologue she would have been 22, and Vinyl would have been 17, making her 21 in the main story. ((I'm only mentioning ages because you wouldn't find little children ponies at a rave, and people were beating me up for it on other websites.))
Thanks for looking, and happy reading~!
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Why are you telling us this? It's fine if a character is OOC aslong as you give us time to adjust to it. We don't know how old they are anyway, so the age thing doesn't matter.
Secondly
Why are you telling us THIS? I always hated when authors outright shout things like this. Yes,
"There will be romance!"
hence the romance tag.
"There will be COMEDY!"
Hence the comedy tag
"And confused feelings!"
Because the description didn't tell me that one clear enough.
It also comes off, to me, as a cheap attempt to wow me as a reader, even before i've read the actual material. While i am not sure what and how you wrote, I am sure of one thing, I dislike most shippings with a passion. So chances are this is not in my interest.
Edit: Reading aaaand...nope. Not in my interest, sorry.
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Good Guy Ancient One: Doesn't thumb down a story just because it's not in his interest.
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W-Why would I thumb something down for not suiting my wants and desires instead of it's actual quality?
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Heh... Not exactly sure how to react to this comment. I'm guessing it's more along the lines of a con-crit? Comes off a little grating... Either way, I know the summary is bad. :P I suck at them on my best days, and I wrote that at midnight really quickly before going to bed. I'm going to fix it now, (and by fix I basically mean cut off some stuff) but that was basically a placeholder to get it approved. If you (or anyone) has any ideas for a better summary, that would be awesome.
And I've taken off the romance tag, simply because, now that I think about it, there probably won't be that much romance. More like...bromance, but with girls. Friendship, I suppose.
Adding the romance tag again. It just needs to be there.
Duly impressed, she nodded slowly and smiled once again, pursing her lips as she did so to create a strange face resembling a happy duck.
“Yeah, Pinkie! You got swag, girl!”
I stopped reading immediately.
just...
no.
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Is this supposed to be constructive?
Kinda...
You might not want to do that.
Based on that, I don't think I will like pinkies personality in this story.
It's just my personal preference though. others may think differently.
but don't change every thing just to please one person, never do that.
just do whatever you want, the story just doesn't strike my fancy.
also, sorry if I came off as mean, but that's just the way I am.
I really meant no harm in that comment.
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Okay, I understand. No one likes everything. Thanks for clearing things up.
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Glad to see your story got off the the ideas page and into an actual fic.
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Yeah... It took awhile, but it's here. (: