After the events of the Day of Sunshine and Rainbows, Little Pip and Celestia spent they're maintaining the weather and watching the creatures of the wasteland below. With tons of time on their hooves, they spent it discussing life, history, the wasteland itself, and their former lives. This is stories of Pip and tia's new life with each other.
Vectors by Comeha
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Oh okay
Also I'm doing a fallout equestria spinoff too
Oof.
Is this a reference to the audio drama truths of a wasteland pony?
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My bad confessions of a wasteland pony by east Corp productions
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No, though I listen to them this is more a take on the Vault Dweller's journal except with other people.
I think this story definitely needs the ‘Comedy’ tag, with how lighthearted and upbeat it is. Truth be told, it could flow better at times, and there’s quite a bunch of spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. However, these few chapters still managed to brighten up my dull afternoon
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Thanks, I have no editor so I try to mange but yeah I wanted a more chill vibe story with Pip and Tia.
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That’s undestandable. To be honest, if you look around the site, you can find quite a bunch of groups with active editors, like this one—though always make sure that the editor you got knows what they are doing. If you don’t want to look for a human editor, you can also go for some online spellcheckers and other error-catching online programs. Google Docs have lately improved their algorithm a fair bit, and it’s pretty good, able to catch even some punctuation errors. Though of course, nothing can replace human eyes yet—none of these programs will be able to notice if you mistype caravan for a cavern or other existing word.
No no no, brain please, dont do this to me
Good idea, decent writing, but, er, improvable spelling.
Honestly, this story doesn't deserve the many down votes, since it's enjoyable enough to read despite the many mistakes.
Thumbs up from me!
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Although, in my experience some of the problems are
It's & its
Too & to
They're, their, & there
etc.
Spellcheckers won't catch these because they are valid words, they are just the WRONG valid word.
You can also have trouble because in Greek mythology Pegasus was the name if Bellerophon's flying horse. Spellcheck thinks that it's supposed to always be capitalized. Google Docs lets you fix that.
Minotaur has the same problem for roughly the same reason.