Entry 5, day 5.
Hello.
It's 5:20 am, and I'm not even sleeping at this time.
Normal people are sleeping at this time, before the sun rises, but I don't sleep until then.
Twilight has been telling me I might get tired and get something called.... sleep deprivation? I dunno.
Anywhoo, I don't know why you are still reading this, but I'll tell you one thing.
This new person came to town last week. His name is Little Bandit. Funny, because it reminds me of Tiku's stupid cousin, Bandit.
He made friends, by the way. Trixie loves him for some apparent reason, but who's to blame her? I mean, all the girls love him. Bright red hair, a bright red-velvet vest.... he's the main thing!
*Bzzz*
Oh.... that's my phone ringing. Give me a quick minute.
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Oh.... hey Fluttershy.
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Yeah, I'm awake. Why?
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Oh... your coming over today?
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Bye.
So get this, my ex girlfriend is coming over for no apparent reason, and I guess should get some rest. Hopefully, things go well today. Cya.
~Surn.
I feel like the only problem to me is that it’s hard to tell what’s present time and what’s a flashback.
Most are present time. Some had been the past.
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Sorry, I don’t think you hit the reply button, so I didn’t see your message.
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Oop, but you still get it, right?
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I think I understand a little bit.
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For example, the next chapter will be a flashback of yesterday.
I hope that will help.
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Ok, but in one of the logs he mentioned doing something a week ago. Will that come up soon?
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Yup!
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Oh, also I think something that might help is changing the text based on the time.
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ooh! Do tell!
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I’ve seen in stories where they the text wouldn’t always be the same, they would either change the color or the style.
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got it. I try that in the next chapter!
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You never knew you could do that?
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Sorta? Dunno, but i'll try it out!
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Ok
Oooh Fluttershy is coming over? Good use of suspense!
Hopefully we can find more depth as to why they broke up, because i can’t imagine she just decided she didn’t love him anymore out of the blue like that
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I’m pretty sure It was because she met someone else.