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Reading a sad break-up story at 1 in the morning oh goody.
Being me and loving some misery, I enjoyed it. I feel you tackled the emotions between Twi and Flash well. I could feel the anxiety from the moment, which I'm always down for.
I do feel like something is missing from the final conversation between Sunset and Flash, though. As if it could have been longer, maybe? It's hard to say--my brain is kinda loopy right now.
In short, I liked it quite a tad! Good stuff.
What is she talking about?
Who else did she show an interest in?
Also, I’m sorry, but I don’t even blame flash for snapping on sunset. I would have either snapped on her worse or went inside, because the things she saying isn’t helping and her timing is terrible.
I think you did great. Very nicely done.
Interesting fic fixing something that bothered me about the movies, not having Twilight making it clear to flash that they can't be together herself, instead of Sunset doing it, without even consulting Twilight, despite having a magic journal to contact her. You also handled it properly by giving it the focus and care it needed instead of Sunset bluntly saying it and shrugging it off when called out. Yeah, this is pretty much how it should have played out in canon, though without the conversation with Sunset that whole thing is a bit of a mess, though at least unlike in canon she seems to understand and realize at least some of her mistakes during it.