This story is a sequel to Trial and Error: Second Edition
When Ember is having trouble at school, his adoptive father takes him on a hunting trip to talk out his problems. However, there are deeper issues rising to the surface.
Chapters (5)
- Member Since 10th Dec, 2011
- offline last seen 1 hour ago
Kiernan
I left for eight years. Now I've returned, a changed beast.
Kiernan
Joined 10th Dec, 2011 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- AmethystAce · 15k words · 82 5 · 2.9k views
- Erised the ink-moth · 153k words · 553 26 · 7.6k views
- HypernovaBolts11 · 35k words · 36 6 · 1.7k views
- CaioCoia · 201k words · 199 28 · 8.1k views
- Autum Breeze · 95k words · 139 19 · 3.1k views
- Rammy · 78k words · 100 15 · 2.8k views
- alarajrogers · 297k words · 1,396 67 · 19k views
- dereturd · 18k words · 84 19 · 4.2k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.14 seconds
Total duration
1,046 users online
2,519,738 hits today, 2,814,898 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
started here first.
first chapter really good,
i wish i could know how perry ended up as he did
wholesome!
i think i missed the part why these two are hungry, but its a good story so far
11527313
Not necessarily hungry. It's meant to just be a reason to let them be completely alone together in the hopes of opening up. They just eat a fair amount because that's how they usually do this.
11527304
Perry was an experiment in biological warfare. Half pony, half dragon. His personality is the result of his complicated relationship with his adoptive father.
11527923
ahh well see i didnt know... consider adding that to the story
this is a good example of storytelling where you DONT need to add all the details.
I cannot figure out why this has bad marks i enjoyed it very much.
if you wanted you CAN add details but it would be distracting from the prospective of this story between ember and perry.
mabye if you add details like a bit of world building like how nervous and cringe they were both feeling when talking aboutbeing gay
very intresting that perry needs release constantly, im guessing he gets tired of rubbing himself as well?
11532039
It has dislikes because I have upset some very petty people here on FiMFiction. I usually have dislikes within ten minutes of posting. A lot of it also comes from people that haven't read it.
An instance stands out to me as my most cathartic moment of telling off a commenter. He was constantly talking about not feeling even remotely bad for the main character, then two-thirds of the way through, he mentioned not knowing a character that had said their own name like he was supposed to know who it was. As it turns out, he wasn't actually reading the story, because that character was pivotal to the second act.
If you're going to insult the story, at least read it, come on.
At any rate, yes, Perry does tire of rubbing himself. He even tires of having others involved. There are instances where he just wants to do stuff without having his dick interrupt everything. Alas, such is not the case. He will eventually end up with two separate harems before dying in a manner similar to the way his father died. Not the same, just similar.
11532117
write a oneshot story on that, only as you said his rod is so ditracting it takes more then 3
im not suggesting infatuation, but.... i mean....ember is there....
11532117
Fim fiction has turned into twitter, i swear....
the rating is for the story and not for the guy.
11532668
That's the problem with having a very long backlog of stories that keeps growing. If I want to write a story about when Perry was temporarily the king of the dragons and had four males and two females sleeping in his bed every night, I have to clear out the stuff in front of it, first.
That doesn't follow show canon, by the way. That story was RPed long before the show decided how dragon society worked, when the closest we had was Dragon Quest.
11532892
it dosent have to