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This reminds me a lot of the Scottish clans

What a genius story. I already see the potencial to Grogar/Octavio become a legit problem to Canterlot Nobels and Celestia.

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Octavio. Until a cutie mark is mentioned I would assume a different entity than Octavia.

I wonder what Luna’s visit to the place would be like when she returns. Would she recognise what Grogar is, maybe. Though she might be too happy to notice him, what with her finding a place so backwards that it hasn’t changed in a full millennium.

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if grognar becomes "reformed" or more at peace with his situation then maby they could be freinds even after she finds out. celestia likely wont be happy so maby in the future we could see a fight against celestia. i am curious what happend in this reality to goat boi's soul as from what i understand grognar hijacked his reincarnation so did his soul get adsorbed or sent elsewhere?

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Seems like a pretty common name/name theme if you ask me

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I’m not sure I get what you are trying to comment on. I was pointing out a spelling error that has since been corrected.

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I was making a joke that Octavia, and variations of Octavia is a common name.
The joke is that's literally what I did

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Grogar/Octavio had fifteen years to come to terms with his situation.
Luna wouldn't be able to tell it's Grogar because they never met before, the only difference she could notice about Octavio is that he has a stronger than normal soul.
Also with Grogar not getting interrupted mid hijacking, Greema is now floating around limbo just like Grogar said he would.

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Wait... That are two seperate storys now? I was under the impression they are only 15 years apart events!

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Yup, this is the timeline where Grogar successfully cut in line and got reincarnated as a pony.

Wonder if he expects the Pinky greeting that awaits him.

Good chapter. I guess he will stay behind in the Nightmaremoon incident to keep himself and others safe and earn respect for keeping the population in line? Potencialy getting in the Royal Guard/Army? His previous experience will let him climb ranks fast since he will apper like a soldier protige.

Damn... Grogar in his new body is male. Since they are in itself a rare goods to Equestria... Perhaps a few Waifus will do?

new computer people woo! also why do you make me want more?

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He should, given that they're siblings :eeyup:

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Many should expect certain things from Pinkie, very few seem to see it coming though.

I like this way more than I probably should. :rainbowlaugh:
And I can't wait for the update to "Child of Grogar". Just remember to save often when you write so you don't lose anything.

Quite intrigued with this and just like Child of Grogar eager to see where it might go.

Who are the two people in the picture?

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that would probably be our main character and another that has yet to be introduced

Excellent chapter with it seems our "hero" being quite a busy bee, plus seeing the start of the series start to come into play. Not to mention Octy getting a very energetic greeting from his sister.

Good effort Octavio, but no cigar.

As for me I didn't have enough time to react before a pony shaped mass of sugar, cotton candy, and sisterly affection crashed into me.

A yes, truly the most dangerous of predators :trollestia:

So former Grogar is going for Economic victory?

Nice chapter :twilightsmile:

Sounds shady... What is there bussness? Drugs, military grade magic mana stone? Medication without License ?

That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

i cant wait for octavio and luna interactions, i want to see all the rock pony families march to canterlot, insult celestia, give allegiance to luna, and give her 1000 years of saved taxes/tribute, and then octavio asking luna who her enemies are so that they may crush them under hoof
this has been the fourth time ive read this now

:pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::facehoof: Knows how to make a first impression that Twilight Sparkle doesn't she. That said great chapter and love the direction you took with Twilight and her sexuality, and it seems she's not only got a wandering eye, but is quite attracted to our former Evil Overlord in particular.

Oh wow, Twilight needs to get laid :moustache:

"HeyOctiareyouokayyoulooklikeyou'reholdinginafartorsomethingdoyouneedtousethebathroomyoucanusemineifyouwa-"

"Nah,that'sApplejack'sjobi'minchargeofthedecora*gasp*THEDECORATIONSohmygoshi'mgonnabelaterarity'sgonnamurderifymenicetoseeyouOctitalktoyoulaterbye."

Pretty please use at least - or _

This is the best day ever! TWILIGHT closet perv Sparkle 👍:twilightsmile:

Una

This chapter was hilarious!:rainbowlaugh:

Bisexual Twilight is something that has been on my mind before, but realised the potential comedy in it until I read this.

:twilightangry2: "Why is everypony so hot!" :twilightoops: :twilightblush: :facehoof:

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