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Tempest Shadow is a unicorn who has pride in her work, friends that care for her, and every reason to be happy. There are a few factors in her life that keep her wondering if she is doing what she should. No longer content to allow those things to control her life, she seeks an audience with Celestia, so she can finally find freedom.
The story is part of the Pandemic AU, but does not require prior knowledge of that universe.
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It seems like you have a broken italic here, cause the rest of the story after this point (and obvious brackets) is all italicized.
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Thanks for the catch. Now fixed.
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No problem, it was a good read and is an interesting concept.
So we see what led Tempest into choosing to become human. It makes it sad to see a pony make this choice and I wonder what her mark would have been if her horn hadn’t gotten broken because it sounds like she may have been a decent mage.
I don't think I've ever read a fic where Tempest is a blank flank before.
Interesting to see Tempest handled as someone suffering a form of dysphoria. Well done.
Although, not sure if it is parishioners or petitioners.
*reads story*
“The story is part of the Pandemic AU, but does not require prior knowledge of that universe.”
Bullshit.
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I'm sorry you felt that way. What was not able to be understood with the context given in the story? I know readers of the AU might get some additional things from this story than non-readers, but I had hoped that the basic concepts of what was happening and why were clearly understandable, even without in-depth background. If there is a detail that makes these confusing, I would like to know, so I can see about a revision.
We need more "ponies want to transform into humans" stories. Humans to ponies is so cliche and overdone at this point.
Heh i was wondering where she was during the Pandemic event
I haven't ever seen a rehumanization done on a equestrian pony but Well there's a first time for everything!
Very nice post. Such a amazing story ever. I would like to say just thanks for the sharing with us. Tell FATZ