OH. MY. GOD. BECKY. LOOK. AT. HER. BUTT.
Those were the last words of Will Short, the weird kid at my school with Pizza Face Syndrome.
On a lovely day, Rainbow Dash falls in love with Big Mac for no reason.
Ice Cream.
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This was a one shot. Don't expect any other chapters.
This is a little something Ali and I put together :3
Don't worry, I'm still working on the Chaotic Misadventures, I just wanted a little break.
Any questions?
1178168My mind is full of fuck right now.
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Glad to hear that
This is freaking hilarious.
Faving this because MacinDash. Downvoting because Trollfic. If it becomes somewhat comprehensible later, I'll change my mind.
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It's already set as Complete, but I'll change it to Incomplete is you really want me to.
Then I can start on a new chapter.
Which is still trolly.
1180428 Eh, it's a start.
wut
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That's way better than my fic XD
I...I don't even know what just happened....but....I LOVE IT!!!!
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All from Ali's imagination. You can thank her!
This is the WEIRDEST fanfic i have ever read (Which is a compliment by the way!) Good job!
What the heck did i just read...
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The contents of your mother's mind.
that fic can be considered madness...
Ok even for the fact, that this Fic is a freaking planless TrollFic... literally ... I can see, that you use far to often things like And, Than, He etc. on the beginning of an sentence. ^^
Try to create Scenes. That helps to create Stories.
P.S. honestly I don't even slightly like random-trollfics. so i refuse to vote.
As a random-trollfic it is good, its funny, yeah, but it's a trollfic. ^^"
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I know it's a Trollfic. XD My writing skills are much better than that, but I refuse to write anything else because I procrastinate a lot.
2257185 ah... yeah... i know what you mean ^^"
Hallo!!!
Hay girly girl! Sup! U at mah schoooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllll me mixed emotions wite naow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
.....That fic broke me.
Nicely done.
I can't stop laughing. MAKE IT STOP!
RIGHT ANOTHER TROLL FIC NOW>
You should add "is a trollfic xDDDD L0L" in the desciption, to stop the flow of dislikes.
This is interesting, although I'm getting a bit confused. What would help is to receive more of a description on who some of these characters (such as Tom and Lily) are, which could also help with the flow. The structure of the prose is also a bit weird at points, since sometimes you indent sentences or center them without warning.
There was a lot of action, though. You clearly had a lot of fun with this.