Sunset was happy. She had friends, happiness and a tomorrow to look forwards too.
That was then.
Out of nowhere a user on MyStable, who went by the name Anon-A-Miss, began exposing everybody's secrets and dumped the blame on Sunset. Her life went to rock bottom in less than a week as everyone turned on her, even her friends harshly disowned her. She eventually decides to move to Crystal Prep in an attempt to get away from her troubles and start again, but some things doesn't stay in the past for long.
Based on the song by DAGames.
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Chapters (5)
I love it, I hope you make more
Hmm, I'll keep an eye on this to see where it goes.
I Liked This Story
Interesting! The big question is who believes Sunset, and wants to transfer? I'm thinking Fluttershy.
And looks like Sunset bumped into her soon-to-be classmate.
I miss just scratching my head who's the girl who wanted to transfer to CPA as well
IT'S FINALLY OUT!!!
I must say, this story is incredible so far! I love how you took the concept of cyberbullying and turned it into a story! Even better, it's based off of a song by my favorite YouTuber! Awesome work, my friend!
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And hey, even better news. Chapter 2 is almost finished.
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Sweet!
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Editing right now actually
FYI, I have a friend who's ancestor A.K.A his great-great-great grandmother was on the R.M.S Lusitania and survived but her lover died.
My great-great-great grandmother was actually on R.M.S Titanic and survived the sinking.
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Interesting. I don't much about my family history other than that my father's side of the family has Polish ancestry.
.............................. Violin Romance theme plays.
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I made sure to include the word 'embarrassed' to not imply it too much, but still hint at a romance. It's also because most SciSet stories has Twilight being very easily embarrassed.
Nice to see Sunset already making a new friend in Crystal Prep after AAM. Even though it’s this world’s version of a friend she already has. But, the one big mystery to me still remains: Who is the mysterious girl who believes Sunset’s innocent and is transferring to Crystal Prep as well?
I’ll just have to find out soon.
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TBH, I’ll be a bit disappointed myself if it is Fluttershy. Because, it’s too obvious.
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Makes the most sense to me. I doubt it's Applejack or Rarity. Dash maybe, Pinkie even more likely. Who knows, maybe it's not even one of the Rainbooms, and just happens to be a girl who feels sorry for Sunset and believes her.
Oh, just wait until the Friendship Games, CHS will have another reason to not like you on top of Anon-a-Miss, Sunset (if the CMC havent cracked by then) Who knows, maybe Anon-a-Miss stopped the moment Sunset transferred out.
I actually found out about the Attack of the Dead Men recently through the band Sabaton. Good band if you're into metal and war-related history. They focus a lot on the world wars but they've done other eras.
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It’s understandable. I just get more interested in the stories where another Rainboom besides Fluttershy is the first to believe Sunset before the truth comes out.
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I get that, like if Dash only faltered a bit, but in the end stuck to her element.
Just going by her character, fluttershy would likely have the most doubts, and judging by this girl's portrayal and actions (i.e. hesitant, trembling, and in tears) it fits her. Of course, it could be a weak point in Dash's confident nature, or Pinkie's jovial nature.
Or like I said it could be someone else entirely (but
to me, it seems like someone very close to Sunset)
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I'm calling Wallflower.
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Seems like so far things are going well for sunset.
So far, this story is incredible! Also, I noticed that you made SEVERAL references to Sabaton songs. Just don't forget that this story is based on a song by DAGames/IRIS, LOL.
I really love this chapter, you are a good writer, i wish I could be a good writer like you
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Believe me, you don't want to read the first stories I wrote here.
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Oh ok
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Yep, I've heard the ones from the Great War album.
Aiyee 🤭 so sweet, Thank you for the update 😘
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No problem
Human Twilight advocating for someone to share their feelings?
She's clearly a changeling!
Get out of there Sunset! 
Yeah, the whole magic thing with CHS was bound to come eventually. Let's just hope with Sunset at her side, SciTwi won't go overboard this time.
I'm loving how the Equestrian villains' counterparts are teachers at CPA, Sombra as a gym teacher, Chrysalis as a History and English teacher, Discord for Science and Math. Princess Twilight would be freaking out if she knew who Sunset's teachers were
(except for maybe Discord cuz, y'know, reformation)
Wait, does Princess Twilight even know Sunset goes to CPA now?
Oh, waiting for the reveal of the mystery girl is killing me.
The Friendship games are sure gonna be interesting with Sunset against CHS now.
So far, so good!
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Stop giving me ideas
I do wonder if the girl that Sunset had ran into is one of the Sirens or another student from Canterlot High?
Anyways great chapter, keep up the awesome work.
10954894 Ohhh, I have a sneaky feeling that I know exactly who it is.
Spoiler alert: It's another student from Canterlot High.
NOT gonna say WHO, though.
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Thanks for not spoiling it.
10954907 You're very welcome.
And trust me, finding out exactly WHO is is will be half the fun!
So...this is it...Sunset finally meets this girl who believes Sunset is innocent and transferred to Crystal Prep as well.
Who is it, you ask?
TAKING ALL BETS, EVERYONE! TAKING ALL BETS!
Who Can Be The Girl ? One Of The Rainboons ? I Bet That Is Fluttershy
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I'm looking forward even more to it.
10954971 I've got my hunches, but my lips are sealed to avoid spoilers.
10955087 Just have to wait and see.
10955097 That makes two of us.
So Sunset's mysterious shadow finally get's caught. Now lets see who it is. And if Sunset's even willing to give her the time of day.
I actually wouldn't mind if Sunset becomes friends with the Shadowbolt girls as it would parallel to what happens in canon after the Friendship Games and Sunset fills SciTwi's role as the transfer student.
And, gah! With that cliffhanger, the suspense is killing me! I'm still betting Sunset's shadow/follower is Fluttershy.
Things are getting interesting. Also, clever choice for the title. Surveillance is another great IRIS song, and with Sunset being watched, it really fits.
Cool.
Cool story. Really enjoying it. Added to my read list.
So is this still in progress?
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Yup, I am working on editing the existing chapters as well as writing the next one.