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Indigo Lightning Strike


Life is gift. Never forget the happiness it brings.

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Sunset was happy. She had friends, happiness and a tomorrow to look forwards too.

That was then.

Out of nowhere a user on MyStable, who went by the name Anon-A-Miss, began exposing everybody's secrets and dumped the blame on Sunset. Her life went to rock bottom in less than a week as everyone turned on her, even her friends harshly disowned her. She eventually decides to move to Crystal Prep in an attempt to get away from her troubles and start again, but some things doesn't stay in the past for long.


Based on the song by DAGames.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 34 )
Artist #1 · May 25th · · · S.O.S ·

I love it, I hope you make more

Hmm, I'll keep an eye on this to see where it goes.

I Liked This Story

Stet709 #4 · May 26th · · · S.O.S ·

Interesting! The big question is who believes Sunset, and wants to transfer? I'm thinking Fluttershy.
And looks like Sunset bumped into her soon-to-be classmate.

I miss just scratching my head who's the girl who wanted to transfer to CPA as well

IT'S FINALLY OUT!!!

I must say, this story is incredible so far! I love how you took the concept of cyberbullying and turned it into a story! Even better, it's based off of a song by my favorite YouTuber! Awesome work, my friend!

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And hey, even better news. Chapter 2 is almost finished.

"It largely depends on what you choose to talk about. The Battle of the Somme, Verdun and Passchendaele would most likely be too obvious, but things like the Attack of the Dead Men, T. E. Lawrence, and the RMS Lusitania would probably be better options." Sunset explained as she scratched her head in thought.

FYI, I have a friend who's ancestor A.K.A his great-great-great grandmother was on the R.M.S Lusitania and survived but her lover died.

My great-great-great grandmother was actually on R.M.S Titanic and survived the sinking.

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Interesting. I don't much about my family history other than that my father's side of the family has Polish ancestry.

Twilight didn't move for a few seconds, but soon she looked back to her own lunch and began eating, feeling slightly more confident in herself. She shot a small glance at Sunset, but looked away again when she saw the girl looking back at her. Twilight could feel her cheeks grow slightly hot as an embarrassed blush grew on her face.

.............................. Violin Romance theme plays.

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I made sure to include the word 'embarrassed' to not imply it too much, but still hint at a romance. It's also because most SciSet stories has Twilight being very easily embarrassed.

Nice to see Sunset already making a new friend in Crystal Prep after AAM. Even though it’s this world’s version of a friend she already has. But, the one big mystery to me still remains: Who is the mysterious girl who believes Sunset’s innocent and is transferring to Crystal Prep as well?

I’ll just have to find out soon.

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TBH, I’ll be a bit disappointed myself if it is Fluttershy. Because, it’s too obvious.

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Makes the most sense to me. I doubt it's Applejack or Rarity. Dash maybe, Pinkie even more likely. Who knows, maybe it's not even one of the Rainbooms, and just happens to be a girl who feels sorry for Sunset and believes her.

Christmas had passed painfully slow for Sunset, but thankfully Christmas break was over and she was finally starting at Crystal Prep. The school uniform would take some time getting used to, but other than that she was happy to be free from the hellhole of her previous school. Here she was a complete stranger. Nobody would judge her from anything she had done. That was her hope at least, which turned out to be true.

Oh, just wait until the Friendship Games, CHS will have another reason to not like you on top of Anon-a-Miss, Sunset (if the CMC havent cracked by then) Who knows, maybe Anon-a-Miss stopped the moment Sunset transferred out.

"It largely depends on what you choose to talk about. The Battle of the Somme, Verdun and Passchendaele would most likely be too obvious, but things like the Attack of the Dead Men, T. E. Lawrence, and the RMS Lusitania would probably be better options." Sunset explained as she scratched her head in thought.

I actually found out about the Attack of the Dead Men recently through the band Sabaton. Good band if you're into metal and war-related history. They focus a lot on the world wars but they've done other eras.

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It’s understandable. I just get more interested in the stories where another Rainboom besides Fluttershy is the first to believe Sunset before the truth comes out.

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I get that, like if Dash only faltered a bit, but in the end stuck to her element.
Just going by her character, fluttershy would likely have the most doubts, and judging by this girl's portrayal and actions (i.e. hesitant, trembling, and in tears) it fits her. Of course, it could be a weak point in Dash's confident nature, or Pinkie's jovial nature.
Or like I said it could be someone else entirely (but
to me, it seems like someone very close to Sunset)

Comment posted by Stet709 deleted May 26th

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I'm calling Wallflower.

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"It largely depends on what you choose to talk about. The Battle of the Somme, Verdun and Passchendaele would most likely be too obvious, but things like the Attack of the Dead Men, T. E. Lawrence, and the RMS Lusitania would probably be better options." Sunset explained as she scratched her head in thought.

"What about the Gallipoli campaign?" Twilight offered.


I actually found out about the Attack of the Dead Men recently through the band Sabaton. Good band if you're into metal and war-related history. They focus a lot on the world wars but they've done other eras.

Seems like so far things are going well for sunset.

So far, this story is incredible! Also, I noticed that you made SEVERAL references to Sabaton songs. Just don't forget that this story is based on a song by DAGames/IRIS, LOL.

I really love this chapter, you are a good writer, i wish I could be a good writer like you

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Believe me, you don't want to read the first stories I wrote here.

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Yep, I've heard the ones from the Great War album.

Aiyee 🤭 so sweet, Thank you for the update 😘

"Sunset, I may not be a social girl, but my family has taught me that bottling something up for too long can lead to disaster. Just tell me, let it out." Twilight said, trying her best to get an honest answer.

Human Twilight advocating for someone to share their feelings?

She's clearly a changeling!:fluttershbad: Get out of there Sunset! :raritycry:

"It was originally a group room, but when I excelled at multiple topics they decided to give me this room for personal use. And they switched the standard door with one that had a key lock on it, so no one else could get in." Twilight continued to explain as she sat down by one of the open desks in the room. Sunset walked up to the pinboard and looked at it close. There were multiple energy readings and statistics showing energy spikes over time. If she was to guess, it was probably the magic that had been used there.

Yeah, the whole magic thing with CHS was bound to come eventually. Let's just hope with Sunset at her side, SciTwi won't go overboard this time.

I'm loving how the Equestrian villains' counterparts are teachers at CPA, Sombra as a gym teacher, Chrysalis as a History and English teacher, Discord for Science and Math. Princess Twilight would be freaking out if she knew who Sunset's teachers were:twilightoops: (except for maybe Discord cuz, y'know, reformation)
Wait, does Princess Twilight even know Sunset goes to CPA now?:rainbowhuh:

"It's good to see you happy again Sunset. I just hope you and I can bury the hatchet when we meet again." the girl said to herself as she headed in a different direction to avoid being seen by the fiery haired girl.

Oh, waiting for the reveal of the mystery girl is killing me.

The Friendship games are sure gonna be interesting with Sunset against CHS now.

So far, so good!

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