• Member Since 7th Jan, 2019
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Hello, Leon Davies here, also known as TheLeondude or just Leondude. Animator, voice actor, writer, autistic British egomaniac, Dark Lord of the Sith etc.


Twilight is trapped inside a laboratory with no idea how she got there. All she could remember was that she had a message from Sunset saying it was an emergency. What’s going on? How did she get here?

And what does an insane duplicate of herself have to do with it?

Partially inspired by this song and by Pages of Harmony.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Not gonna lie- I thought it was Miko from Glitch Tech at first glance. I'll put this onto my read later list. Also, hi:heart:

I suppose she does have a resemblance to Twilight's human form, along with Stocking from Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt.

Must be the hair. :twilightsmile:

10462389 That's exactly what it was. I do see your story has some dislikes but don't let that get you down:heart:

Not to worry. When it comes to my stories, the likes always outnumber the dislikes.

Except for The Tragedy of Sacanas. That currently has the same number of likes and dislikes.

“Now for the next phase.”

the next phase? What is that?! I wanna know more!

Well, interesting, let's see how it continue, if it continue


Interesting story. I am familiar with a music video that your fic is based on.

I have a complicated view on dark themes and horror in general. The idea of an Evil Twilight has potential, which is why I checked your fic out.

It’s very well written, dark and suspenseful. Evil Twilight full of a passion for knowledge and totally ruthless. And Twilight terrified.

A few details aren’t my cup of tea. A few details don’t feel like canon. Do you want me to elaborate?

The experimentation is dark and creepy and part where Evil Twilight tampers with Twilight’s memories was very suspenseful.

I am glad that the the language is clean and nothing is suggestive. A few details are dark and disturbing, but not explicit. You have my Thanks.

I do feel the story is incomplete and needs more chapters or a sequal. Not innately a happy ending. But evil at least getting their just desserts. Well that’s my opinion anyway.

I hope you like this review though there is criticism. I have a question if it’s alright. Please contact me. God bless

Data Seeker

I'm glad you liked my fic. And, yeah, I agree that the story needs a sequel. Though when I get around to it, I do not know.

Still, I'd be more than happy to answer whatever questions you may have. :twilightsmile:


First, thanks for replying. It means a lot to me.

And to my question, I didn't know if you were going to do a sequel or continuation. I think you should.

My question is can I do a variant of your fic?

There is a rule on fanfiction websites: don't copy other people's stuff. Of course what constitutes belonging to someone?

Originality seems to have gone the way of the dodo. For example, there various fics with the Dazzlings being reformed. Some have similarities, like a few have them be homeless, or can't eat real food, thus are starving. A few have them have skills to survive in society. These are just a tiny examples.

Arguably I can take ideas from different stories and make them different enough that I won't be violating the copyright infringement rule. If there are many fics that are similar, I don't need permission. But if a story is unique I prefer to ask permission to avoid messy situations.

Your story is unique because Evil Twilight is original. Yes, Midnight Sparkle is evil, but yours stands out from that obviously. I have checked fics for evil twilight and...couldn't find anything remotely like yours.

So can I do a variant of your fic if I get the chance? Second, your fic is based off that Youtube video, so am I asking the wrong person for permission? God bless

Data Seeker

Sure, I'd be happy for you to do a variant of my fic.

Just make sure to credit me for inspiration, 'kay? :raritywink:

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