Quick note: This is my first CYOA story. So bear with me. It is also an experiment and a mini story to try out a new writing method.
You and Rainbow Dash have been friends for many years.
Although you you've both grown, gotten new friends, new lives, you still hang out a lot. You love to race, to tease, and play games with Rainbow.
Though you heard from a certain white unicorn is working at a maid café. Naturally you could hardly resist the chance of seeing Rainbow Danger Dash dressed as a maid.
Off to the café you go!
Good luck! 
Chapters (17)
I'll make sure to read it in my down time.
No worries!
Woooo!!! First ending!
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Congrats!
You forgot to replace it with “yours” here
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Thank you, not used to write second person.
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Thanks, this was a lovely Rainbow Dash X OC story. It may have been short but the emotion in the writing more then made up for it.
The only real problems i’ve seen are times when the perspective changes from 2nd to 3rd person. For example:
But aside from grammatical errors i loved it!
The second time you said “ I figured you would like some water” is unnecessary. It would be better to phrase It as:
I know what I thought of when I read the description? The Maid-sama manga. Check it out some time. It's really good.
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I already have, it was so funny.
I don’t mean to be that guy, buuuuuuuut....
It’s supposed to be “Neither of you” when it’s just two people. “None of you” implies there is three or more people involved.
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It's okay, English is not my first language, so anything I can learn is always appreciated.
I can't believe I nearly friendzoned rainbow dash, the audacity! Can't speak fo all the routes but I loved this ending. Certainly curious of the other possible routes.
for your first time doing one of these it was good if you decide to do more I would love to try them.
Also best ending first try yeeessss
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Thank you!
I was really nervous trying it out, I wanted to make people feel they actually had choices that mattered so they felt a part of the story and was not sure along for the ride.
Still, I like the end result.
I got the good ending! I think...? Well, I'm not sure if there is a bad ending, but I'm happy regardless. Well done, I had fun!
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Well bad or good, that's up to you how you feel. I think the only bad ending probably End-1. The rest is neutral at worst.
Glad you had fun though.
That was great! The way you made RD sound like her is somewhat tough, but this is really good. The way you coloured the text made it so much more immersive, and an overall great story!
Nice job man
Short but sweet, like that delicious cake
Really good story! This is probably the first CYOA I've ever finished, and this was a beautiful one.
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Thank you, that means a lot. I hope to do more in the future. ^^
My cool, colourful friend, have I ever let you down? Huh, Rainbow? A maid or not... you're still awesome!
I like the smooch ending, but the "Master" adds something special to RD. Nicely done :)
Grate story.