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This story is a sequel to Tails of Innocence


It has been over 50 years since Princess Celestia took in a little three-tailed fox as her student, years filled with affection, teaching, discoveries, and love, raising her in the hope she could purify Luna from her corruption.

Now the day has come as the seal holding Nightmare Moon trapped is about to break. It is up to Kyuubi and Twilight to save Princess Luna.

Will the five-tailed kitsune step up and succeed? How will Ponyville react to a four-meters tall but fluffy predator? And most importantly, what struggles and sacrifices will be needed to achieve victory, and who will have to make them?

Special thanks for assistance to passionate proof-readers:
Sweetolebob18
RebelRogue12
Also, I need to praise Grammary. It helps a lot in polishing department.

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 49 )

just letting you know i did not know there was a sequel to Tails of Innocence because it is still " Incomplete" you might want to put up a chapter in Tails of Innocence telling people there is a Sequel / make it complete

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I wanted to upload the sequel and the epilogue of the first story at the same time, so I was just waiting for this story to come in alive. I uploaded the epilogue with link to the sequel in the autor notes. Sorry if it caused any confusion.

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np love the story it is very well written and good content thank for Writing it

a-a... A Sequal!!! At least I know why the last chapter of 'Tails if Innocent's' took a bit to come out, but, I think I like this outcome!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Edit: oh wait, I would have known of the sequel already if I checked my notifications:twilightblush:

Also, I need to praise Grammary. It helps a lot in polishing department.

If you meant Grammarly, then I Agree.

Kyuubi’s smile was still warm as it was in the past hour. Applejack, lying is a sin, and I never hid anything about myself. She held her forepaw on her chest. I told every detail of my past to the princess, even if it put me in a bad light. And I have no intention of hiding my horrible deeds. I’m dangerous, a natural enemy to beings filled with magic, and I will never hide it from anypony.

She skipped the part where one of the priests jumped in front of the sword to protect her. The following memory caused her ears to drop as a few foals and fillies noticed the distress on her face. It was the day when she pushed her healing magic to its limits, healing the priest and herself. She stained the Canterlot garden with her blood as two royal guards witnessed her healing abilities first-hoof.

Oh really? This other paragraph seems to show quite the opposite... While it wasn't really anything bad about yourself, you still skipped it, which could be interpreted as hiding it. (Imagine a Smug pony with a raised I eyebrow... That's me.)

Pinkie, if can somehow read this, give Kyuubi a smug grin with your eyebrows raises for me. Wait... no actually, give the adorable little fortress a hug for me:twilightblush:

Besides, you'd get the excuse to hug that fluffy, soft, heavenly fur a bit longer and I can say I(kind of) hugged a fictional, adorable, fluffy character.:raritywink::rainbowlaugh:

I imagine if she could break the fourth wall, I'd get a message back with something along the lines of, "I'm sorry, but the pony you have messaged is not available"

Anyways now that that's done, I'm loving these new chapters. It almost feels... more refreshing from Tails of Innocent's after waiting for the next chapter hoping that the time would come that we'd see Luna

"Fly? It's nothing like that," Lily said as she spun in mid-air, sending a wave of wind which shook Dash's tail and mane. "I use wind magic to keep myself afloat. It also let me run on air or jump extra high." She walked to the side of the pegasus and pulled her wing. "It can't match the flight of the pegasi, but it allows me to fight on their turf." She gave Dash's nose a seemingly casual poke, causing her to fall off the cloud.

forgot the " 's " :raritywink:

Flutters and the Fortress of Fluff

Seems like Fort Fluff hath found a powerful ally/enemy. And quite possibly the only thing that could ever lay siege to Fort Fluff

Oh, what a wonderful way to start the weekend. These chapters have got to be The best I've seen.:pinkiehappy: What I wouldn't give to hug Fort Fluff... Wait...:pinkiegasp: Am I actually jealous that the fictional characters in the story get to actually have a big, giant, adorable Fortress of Fluff...?:rainbowhuh: Wow...:twilightblush: Guess I need no more evidence that this story also goes to the 'MasterPieces' list...


But seriously? I'm actually jealous of a fictional character. And I just realized that now... Huh, that's a first. Guess that just shows how much I enjoy the story:pinkiehappy:

EDIT: Oh no, I've done it again. I've filled up the comment section with long comments again...

well there goes a few apple trees..

And so it begins.

Kyuubi best fortress, don’t @ me. :rainbowkiss:

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Let no one say otherwise!

I was rather jealous of Fluttershy myself.

All in all, I'd call this chapter a resounding success, Fluttershy meeting Kyuubi was my most anticipated encounter since finding this series.

I particularly enjoyed Kyuubi introducing herself as a tiny cub and then FS convincing her to grow to regular size again, both were a stroke of genius! Well done, Commander!

This right here is what I needed most right now. This chapter alone had me D'awwing and smiling so much that my cheeks started cramping. I even shed tears of joy at Fort Fluff behaving like this. Also an FYI dear Commander a young fox is called a kit. A female fox is a vixen and the sound she would have been making would not have been purring but churring. Just a slight helping hoof from a fellow animal lover like Flutters. Also the reactions of RD to all this was priceless! Keep up the wonderful work. This chapter is so good that it becomes literally impossible to rate. It is legendary in its wholesome fluffiness!

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Oh really? This previous paragraph seems to show quite the opposite... While it wasn't really anything bad about yourself, you still skipped it, which could be interpreted as hiding it

It wasn't lying but more of a censorship. She skipped this fragment because she felt it was too hard to stomach, not because it would paint her in bad way. In fact, if she did mention it, she would receive quite a lot of pity.

Seems like Fort Fluff hath found a powerful ally/enemy. And quite possibly the only thing that could ever lay siege to Fort Fluff

Mighty ally/rival indeed. An unstopable force to unmovable object.


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Considering all the efforts we put into polishing those chapters, I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Seems Fluff Fortress realy got more popular recently. Funny that Kyuubi became more atractive as a massive kitsune rather than little one. (Who said only little ones can be cute).

Also, I don't mind long comments at all. Keep them comming.

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Kyuubi best fortress, don’t @ me.

She's a fortress everyone want to defend, live in, and siege at the same time.

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I particularly enjoyed Kyuubi introducing herself as a tiny cub and then FS convincing her to grow to regular size again, both were a stroke of genius! Well done, Commander!

Thank you very much. There's something about two forces of kindness coliding with each other for the first time that I enjoy a lot, so I put extra efforts into writting them. First was NIca (Raichu) and Fluttershy, and now Kyuubi and Fluttershy. Though this one is vastly superior.
Congratulations also goes to RebelRogue12
He helped me expand on interactions between Fluttershy and full-sized Kyuubi, something I struggled with for a while.

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I love it

Thanks. Hope many share your view.

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churring and kit

Never heard of those, is this realy a thing?
Also, what would suit little Kyuubi. Little/young vixen, or kit?

This chapter is so good that it becomes literally impossible to rate. It is legendary in its wholesome fluffiness!

In previous story I noticed that more and more readers realy enjoy reading about Kyuubi's cuddly/fluffy site. Her meeting Fluttershy was a perfect opportunity to set it up to eleven. Glaid it worked out.

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Sorry but I'm @ing you for a good reason YOU ARE RIGHT MY GOOD HERO!!!!!!

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I can imagine Kyuubi in some emotional dilemma and Celestia saying something along the lines of,

"You're still my little vitex."
or
"You're still my cute little vitex"

Personally, I don't see where kit would fit in, maybe I'm just not thinking hard enough where the word kit would smoothly fit in... Hmm Beside, Kyuubi is like half a century old. If you used the fact that she is probably near or close to immortal, and thus still basically a baby, then the same could be said about Celestia thousand years of experience or not.

I wonder if maybe Kyubi should wander into ponytown at full size with fluttershy riding atop her bod.

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I wonder if maybe Kyubi should wander into ponytown at full size with fluttershy riding atop her bod.

What does "bod" mean?

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me thinks they meant 'body' but i rather she rode ontop of her head. Let them all see "holy faust, did shy tamed that?" lmao

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Kit most definitely would work best when referring to her in her smallest appearance. And I totally agree. This chapter cranked it up to 11 if not 100.

Glad for your averting of the 'Rainbow Dash is immediately mistrustful, hostile and aggressive to outsiders' trope. I consider it a victory whenever she doesn't fall in that category, it gets old after a while. "Where'd it even come from?" Is one of my main questions.

I also found Lily's competitive camaraderie with Dash to be particularly heartwarming.

Nice, I bet the townsfolk were super jelly

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Not yet. So far they didn't see Kyuubi at her full size since Pinkie gathered them at the library. They are about to find out.

Typical Pinkie. Honestly, when I first saw this, I was completely unsurprised, I'm sure someone else would've suggested it, even; it just would've been too much of a missed opportunity otherwise. This chapter was a good way to introduce Pinkie and her hijinks.

Also to remind folks that 5 of the Main 6 may have been 'friends' at the start, but not inseparable. Though if Kyuubi has her way, will the Main 6 even become best friends now, if they're not needed?

Huh, what would happen if kyuubi bit tirek?

They told me not to question Pinkie Pie, BUT I DIDN’T LISTEN!

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Typical Pinkie. Honestly, when I first saw this, I was completely unsurprised, I'm sure someone else would've suggested it, even; it just would've been too much of a missed opportunity otherwise. This chapter was a good way to introduce Pinkie and her hijinks.

I hoped to introduce Pinkie's weird abilities to Kyuubi in some way in this chapter. Swimming in her fur, or rather swimming in Kyuubi itself was the best I could come up with.

Though if Kyuubi has her way, will the Main 6 even become best friends now, if they're not needed?

It depends if Twilight will get along with other main 6 members even without Nightmre Moon's crisis. At worst, awaking Elements would have been delayed until a new threat would appear.

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Huh, what would happen if kyuubi bit tirek?

She would grow in size while Tirek would shrink, plus he would lose a bit of his meat to the kitsune's appetite.
Both Kyuubi and Tirek have the ability to drain magic from each other. Let's just say that Kyuubi's method is more permanent and more direct.

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Essentially dealing more damage physical and magical-wise

WHAT HOW DID I MISS A NEW CHAPTER FROM TWO DAYS AGO?!?! Oh wait, because I've been hooked on a Fallout Equestria game since two days ago and have barely touched fimfiction since then:rainbowlaugh:

Go ahead and enjoy it. The pool is open. The fluff's fine! Kyuubi joked with a cheerful giggle as she stood up to her full height. She bestowed her passengers with a peaceful smile before resuming her walk, though still paying attention to the ponies. Dash flew next to her head.

Oh no, Kyuubi has released Fluff Grade Weapons of Mass 'Fluffing' on those poor ponies...

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Oh no, Kyuubi has released Fluff Grade Weapons of Mass 'Fluffing' on those poor ponies...

And to make matters worse, Pinkie took her words quite literaly.

The fluff has intensified; it is super effective.

Good job on the new chapter! Also 2nd person That read this!

You know, I've had the feeling we'd soon have kitsune clothing... wait, No! She's found a way to distribute her Fluff Grade Weapons of Mass Fluff to all of Equestria! EVERYPONY RUN!

10 years later

"MuahahHA! I began my takeover of all the world years ago and you ponies never realized it! First, it started with clothing...-"

And that's how the equestrian economy fell to Kyuubi's giving out mini Fluff Grade Weapons of Fluff to all of Equestria.

Oh, you're early!

And so Rarity meets Kyuubi and there's once more huge emphasis on our Kyuubi's fur. Surprised it was Kyuubi's idea to put forth her fur for clothing.

Kyuubi wearing a bowtie; Really, and I thought she couldn't get cuter in my mind's eye.

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You know, I've had the feeling we'd soon have kitsune clothing... wait, No! She's found a way to distribute her Fluff Grade Weapons of Mass Fluff to all of Equestria! EVERYPONY RUN!

10 years later

"MuahahHA! I began my takeover of all the world years ago and you ponies never realized it! First, it started with clothing...-"

And that's how the equestrian economy fell to Kyuubi's giving out mini Fluff Grade Weapons of Fluff to all of Equestria.

To be fair, it is the most peaceful takeover possible, winning ponies hearts with her fluff on a granter scale.

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Oh, you're early!

I was late in last upload, so I decided to go ealier with this one.

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Surprised it was Kyuubi's idea to put forth her fur for clothing.

You think Rarity would suggest it if Kyuubi didn't?

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Kyuubi wearing a bowtie; Really, and I thought she couldn't get cuter in my mind's eye.

Cuter? I thought it would make her classier? Maybe I should've gone with 'monocle' and 'fedora' instead.

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Makes me think of that Celestia Is In Your Bed spinoff story where ponies jump worlds to earth to replace all the pillows and bedsheets. Princess Celestia Has Stolen All Your Bed Sheets

Hmm, yes, very sophisticated indeed. Jolly good show, old bean.

Ah, this sequel shall be grand!

The reactions, interactions, and later realizations are pretty realistic when it comes to Applejack and her family, a well written chapter!

CUTE OVERLOAD! CAN'T! CONTAIN! THE CUTENESS!

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Congratulations on being featured.

Every story that at least once was featured will be featured again during every update, though it will last only an hour or two at best.

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The reactions, interactions, and later realizations are pretty realistic when it comes to Applejack and her family, a well written chapter!

Thank you. Applejack was always the type that didn't get along with animals other than vinona, especialy predators, so I assumed she wouldn't react too well to Kyuubi's pretatory actions. But even she can respect and trust someone to is very honest, and Kyuubi is honest to a fault.

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CUTE OVERLOAD! CAN'T! CONTAIN! THE CUTENESS!

Thanks. I wanted to make this meeting especialy cute, considering Fluttershy and Kyuubi are both forces of extreme kindness.

What a nice surprise to wake up too! It feels like it's been more than weeks since the last chapter, but then again it's probably just me. Right now, I'm just curious about how much did Kyuubi change with the butterfly effect. Will destiny stay the same? Will it change, for good or worse? Would it change, but still have the same effect?

Find out next time, on Tails of Sacrifice!

Man, I wonder if that headcanon for this fic will come true, or if it just happens that they were English knights and strung random syllables together and it was a coincidence.

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