Is this inspired by Star either because it feels like it is but that's just my opinion

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Bingo. I’m a big fan of Von. So when I heard he was taking down the story. I figured it was a good time to right one of my own, and hope it can become the next big adventure story like Star Eater

I hope that you succeed in your goal and now I'm still mourning the loss of Star Eater

I began to let all of my earlier locked up thoughts into the forefront of my mind. Is this world just as twisted as the hell hole that was earth? This place really did need saving. I can't do this. Not again. Please god not again! They're just kids!! I can't save them all!! "I can't make a decision like that again!!!"

misterious past and secret keept form him i wonder how that will play out. one thing is clear luna and celestia need him for
something

He looked over at the corpses and spoke. "Someone will come by and dispose of them, we can take our leave now." Without saying a word, I sprinted back to Ponyville, meaning I got there instantly with my rage and adrenaline boosting my speed.

Why not using his fire bending to incinerate the corpse instead of waiting for the disposal team? It should be quicker don't you think?

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It would but he might not want to reveal all of his cards, and the princesses might want to study the bodies.