1212247 No, I do have a proof-reader, I just forgot the name of the forest. I guess he missed it too. I took a stab at it and got it wrong. Honestly, I could have taken 10 seconds to look it up. Just lazy on my part. I'll do better on my research from now on. Thank you for your offer, though! Should I need services in the future, I'll look you up.
Also, everyone look for chapter 3 to be up by Friday at the latest.
1224313 Yes, of course. The funny thing is, both my reviewer and my girlfriend told me of this error and I STILL forgot to fix it. If you can all look past my occasional grammar error, I would appreciate it.
Also, thanks to all of you for your overwhelming support. I wasn't sure what to expect when I posted this story (even after my reviewer - who will get proper credit after the story is finished - said it was good), so I've been apprehensive. And waiting for the negative comments. But they haven't come, except in the form of 2 thumbs down. Considering the 40 thumbs up at the time of this comment, I think I can say that I did all right.
Thanks for all of your support, and please visit my user page to read my future story ideas, pitch ideas you would like me to write about, and debate me on the virtues of free market.
"I...I've been with somepony, but I don't have feelings for that pony." Fluttershy looked at Twilight's face to see if she understood. Twilight nearly gasped as realization hit her. Fluttershy wasn't a virgin.
Damn. Of all the ponies is Equestria, Fluttershy is the last pony I would have expected to have one-night stand. Or friend with benefits, whichever is correct. YOU GO GIRL.
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LOL XD
Fluttershy isn't a virgin.. *giggle*
Nonono I didn't mean to laugh at you, 'Shy, I'm sorry..
~Rosalynn~
Cue the rim shot and slide whistle. I bet I know who Flutters was with.
Need a proofreader? I'll be glad to help
whenif I find time.1212247 No, I do have a proof-reader, I just forgot the name of the forest. I guess he missed it too. I took a stab at it and got it wrong. Honestly, I could have taken 10 seconds to look it up. Just lazy on my part. I'll do better on my research from now on. Thank you for your offer, though! Should I need services in the future, I'll look you up.
Also, everyone look for chapter 3 to be up by Friday at the latest.
Why is it always the shy ones!!!!!!!!
Like the story so far cant wait to read the rest <3!
Ooh, wonder who the mystery pony is....if it's anypony we know of course,
1224313 Yes, of course. The funny thing is, both my reviewer and my girlfriend told me of this error and I STILL forgot to fix it. If you can all look past my occasional grammar error, I would appreciate it.
Also, thanks to all of you for your overwhelming support. I wasn't sure what to expect when I posted this story (even after my reviewer - who will get proper credit after the story is finished - said it was good), so I've been apprehensive. And waiting for the negative comments. But they haven't come, except in the form of 2 thumbs down. Considering the 40 thumbs up at the time of this comment, I think I can say that I did all right.
Thanks for all of your support, and please visit my user page to read my future story ideas, pitch ideas you would like me to write about, and debate me on the virtues of free market.
Yours in Honor,
TheRedArmy
1216895No no no no. Its always the QUIET ones!
Damn. Of all the ponies is Equestria, Fluttershy is the last pony I would have expected to have one-night stand. Or friend with benefits, whichever is correct. YOU GO GIRL.