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Derpy is just reading a bed time story to her daughter. what would you do if you where trapped in a fairy tale without knowing what happens after the ending, Fairy tales are good right? well this is no fairy tale its real life.

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This really needs a proof reader - I gave up before the end of the second paragraph, just because of the number of errors I saw. It makes it look like you don't care about the quality of your work. Sorry.

odd question can i fix this story to make more people understand it. I will put a link going to the this story the real one.
i just want to try and help this story:fluttershysad:

Please, please, please! I really ,really loved this story, 'cause I ABSOLUTELY am addicted to Disney things, and Cinderella is one of my favourite princesses, and I can really see Ditzy as cinderella! I really want some more, so could you please write some more?

This has a lot of errors in it.:unsuresweetie:
But this is a good story idea.

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