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TheEighthDayofNight


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Most enjoyably absurd. Thank you for a lovely bit of goofiness.

Those silly story ponies and their silly adventures

That’s kid of suspicious if you ask me.

*kind

Since the majority of this fanfic only has the two Twilights, it’s jarring when other characters suddenly appear at the end. Also, I was half-expecting this to be a feghoot.

“Don’t play dumb, that only solidifies my theory. A real version of me would know that we can’t be dumb. It’s physically impossible for us.”

Don't count on that one...

“Anything else to say?”
“Why are we so obnoxiously purple?”

Both Twi's should band together and search for an answer to this question.

“That’s two more for making out. Maybe I should try finding a make out double.”
Spike snorted and crossed his arms.
“It’s probably going to be the only way you don’t die a virgin, so I say go for it.

She doesn't even try to deny it...


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.

But I recommend to remove all character tags except Twilight (and maybe Spike).
The roles of the other characters are just too minor as they should have tags.

Okay, I was thinking this was too much, but I laughed at the end. Good job.

That whole thing was a wild ride! A fever dream! A... A... I don't know what else!

But boy, was that funny.

Celestia to Luna... "So we wasted our only Sunday off per month for this?"

“Oh, and Luna too. Heck, I still remember the diary entry. We were trying to go for the trivecta, but then Shiney had a kid with Cadence. Kind of locked that piece of flank down, but I think we’d be more than willing to settle for two all-powerful goddess ponies if we’d just ask them out.”

You just have to wait 80 years for your brother to die of old age, then it's fair game again.

I, um… okay.

A shot rang out, followed by a birdlike shriek from the ceiling. A purple body thudded into the ground, twitching erratically. Both Twilights eyed the body, then looked toward the ceiling. Twilight oh’ed softly and bit her lip.

This was one of those moments where I'm both grinning at it and facepalming because I know that the rest of the story isn't gonna back down from what it's becoming. Absurdity indeed; well done.

Comment posted by Ali della Morte deleted Sep 28th, 2020
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“The Ponyville newspaper put out a poll and we were elected dumbest purple horse of the year.”

wtf XD

“Oh thank Celestia, I thought that was just me.”

The only acceptable response.

What the hell did I just read?

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