Just a kid with a selfish dream, waiting on people to be what they seem.
All I wanted was inspiration. When I found it, I suppose it made me a little giddy, as it always does. I got excited, of course.
But no, I never went too far.
NOTE: for the first (in a while) prompt for Author Support : You are running through the Everfree Forest when you come across SOMETHING. What do you do with SOMETHING? tied for third place
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I'd absolutely LOVE to know what made you hate it. Or love it. Just talk to me.
I enjoyed this. Simply because I did.
'Never mind how the doll ended up in the middle of the Everfree Forest.'
Magic.
-Weatherstorm
A very intriguing quick read, Kartal. I like ending. Keep up the good work!
To be honest, I'm not sure how I feel about this story. Good concept, just... doesn't appeal to me.
Still, I'm sure others will like it. 
Ummm... here. Take this:
I don't want it.
Poor Spike is unloved
Rarity you cheater. You would have got there in the end without using all that magic
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Great short story Kartal, I do indeed like it.
1194430 Dude, you caught this fast.
I think that's a record for one of my fics so have a Derpy. 
1194481 I hoped that ending worked. One-shots are hard. They have to have good endings so I'm glad I succeeded.
1194514 I understand. I didn't really expect this to be well-liked. I did just smack a canon romance in the face.
1194515 So, so very unloved...MWAHAHA--ahem. Yes well...
1194625 NO! I HAD TO BE LOVED! LOVED, I SAY!
Also, thank you all for the happy thoughts. I really didn't expect this to be liked. Like at all.
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Thank you kindly for the Derpy!
In recognition for this, I shall link you to my newest fic! Self promotion FTW!
1194660 You have to be loved but you can't love Spike back? Hmm...I'm okay with that.
Meh...
1194700 See now this is the kind of thing I expected. Granted, I expected a reason to go along with it but whatever.
It was... hm... how to put this.
I liked it, but it wasn't for me. First of all, why the alternate universe tag?
Second, I don't think that Rarity would have run away like that. She seems pretty tolerant of Spike, after all.
But Smarty Pants...
Big Mac, did you put him in the forest?
Sure... sure...
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It's alternate universe because Rarity is major OOC here and hates Spike.
Sure, Macintosh...just keep telling yourself that...
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...
Good enough of an explanation for me!
But eventually Rarity could not take all the constant publicity, all the attention, anymore.
So she killed them all.
Teh end.
1195161 And then someone else wrote that story, but to avoid copyright, they wrote it before my story even came out and gave it a completely different reason for the gore...
The REAL end.
Congratulations, number 7. You solved the matrix.
not dark
i really like the feel of this, nice and simple
i could see rarity becoming corrupt from such a spell.
Wow. That's creepy. Only a thousand-ish words, but you've managed to make something more disturbing than a lot of authors could manage with a lot more than that.
Although from how you opened the story, it sounds like she eventually got caught.
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You don't even know how happy a comment like that makes me.