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Leafy


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Surn: A stubborn person. Mainly not one to persuade so easily!

Rarity: A fashionista. She has a passion for fashion! Why do I rhyme all the time?

Both these two hate each other.... Or is that the case?

Realty is what you think it is....

Follow Surn and Rarity on how they both find something both in their hearts to show that they really do care.

What?! No I don't! I hate her!

Yeah! I hate him as much as he hates me!

Oh brother. :facehoof:

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

I really enjoy your takes on characters. I can't quite describe it exactly. The best I can think of is 'high energy' but that doesn't do it justice!

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Heh. Thankles! =D

"G-go away! No one's here! J-just your imagination! Shoo!" The person said. The voice sounded like a boy, so Rarity ruled Princess Twilight out. But who could this person be?

I donโ€™t know why, but this is funny.

Azan groaned. The burst wisps are his least favorites. They burn him to ashes all the time.

So, is he like a Phoenix?

Then Azan came in. "Actually, Tiku and Bandit agreed this this was the best thing to do. Sorry Surn."

Wooooowwwww, f*ck everyone of Surnโ€™s friends.

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nah. Kinda like aliens with powers. And yeah. F**ck all of his friends XD

Man, beyblade was and still is the sh*t. Also, didnโ€™t the description say they hated each other? How did that happen?

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It will all be explained soon.....

What's a surn? Did you mean to say stern?

Oh goodness... I'm gonna have to go change the Author's note on "Ending Rarity"!

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I thought he was a pony, originally, so now I have to go change my Author's Note from "Surn is not mine" to "Surn is not mine, and is based upon..." because in my story Surn is a pegasus and not a "Sonic + Tails" hybrid... It's already done, so...

"You mean yours? Ha! You silly guy!" Azan said as noggied my head.

Did you mean "noogied"?

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Yes. I'll fix that.

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It's fine. It doesn't matter. Feel free to do what ever you need!

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Thanks, for both. I also noticed a missing word somewhere else, I'll try to find it here soon... Gimme a few moments.

The next day, Rarity had begun to work on her Hearth's warming dresses for her friends. She had to make them * absolutely no distractions, or she might mess up the entire dress.

Where there's that asterisk, there needs to be a "with" put there, so it makes more sense.

Oh, so they develop a hatred for each other throughout the story.

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