Revelations
Late that same evening, things were only getting much worse for young Victoria. She sat in her chair by her vanity while Hildegarde helped her finish getting ready. Victoria was dressed in a beautiful wedding gown with her hair all done up in a tight bun which also held the wedding veil securely in place. One would think this was meant to be the happiest, most jubilant day of her young life.
Yet the poor girl felt a terrible feeling of dread and despair. Her one true love gone, possibly forever, and she had been betrothed by her parents to some newcomer earlier that same night. All she could think about was Victor, as she looked into the mirror and Hildegarde finished up.
“Miss Victoria, we must leave for the church now…” Hildegard informed her gently.
The old maid looked at Victoria and could see the obvious pain and sadness in her eyes. She truly felt bad for her, wishing there were some way she could help. But she knew that was impossible at this point. Yet when she looks up, it’s obvious she’s been crying.
“Yesterday, I thought my wedding would be happy,” Victoria said sadly. “Now I feel like I’m caught in the tide, pulled out to sea.”
A single tear fell below her porcelain cheek, as she stood from the chair. Hildegarde took her face in her hands, brushing away the tear with an offer of reassurance.
“The sea leads to many places dearie,” She said. “Maybe you’ll find somewhere better.”
With that, the old maid regretfully lead the young bride from the room toward her fate. They proceeded to leave the mansion and climbed into one of the carriages outside. The carriage took them to the church outside town. Not a single star shined nor even the moon. It is a somber, ponderously bleak night accentuated by the sound of lugubrious organ music.
As the wedding progressed, Victoria stood dully at the altar, wearing her austere ivory wedding gown. Like a girl completely dead to the entire world around her, she paid no mind to anyone in the room looking at her or Pastor Galswells, who officiates the ceremony. Not even the portrait of the Duke, which has been brought to the church and placed in a seat of honor, as if to bear witness to the ceremony.
Her husband to be, Lord Barkis, stood at her side with a smug smirk on his face as he went through his vows. Much like Finnis Everglot, he wore a rather formal wedding suit with a matching towering top hat.
“With this hand, I will lift your sorrows. Your cup will never empty, for I will be your wine. With this candle, I will light your way in darkness. With this ring, I ask you to be mine.”
He slipped an ornate ring onto Victoria’s finger and when he let go, Victoria let her hand fall limp to her side as she stood with wide eyes. The silent crowd sat, stiff and starched in their grey suits and dresses. Among them, Hildegarde sat amongst the crowd, feeling sorry for the young Everglot. Pastor Galswells nodded toward Victoria, gesturing it is her cue to move on.
Realizing er fate had now been sealed, she took a deep breath and closed her eyes in sorrow before taking the candle from the table.
“Wit this hand I will lift your sorrows…” Victoria whimpered. “Your cup will never empty, for I will be your wine. With this candle, I will light your way in darkness. With this ring, I ask you to be mine.”
She slid a gold ring onto Barkis’ chubby finger. He offered a saccharine smile, as much for the crowd as anyone.
“I now pronounce you, man and wife,” Pastor Galswells announced.
The entire room remained silent as the grave, all but Hildegarde who sat in the back of the church sobbing. However, her tears were not of happiness for Victoria, but pity. She felt so terrible for the poor girl, yet there was nothing she could do for her. Her only hope was that something would come along to help the girl out of this predicament.
As for Victoria, as Barkis leaned in for a kiss, she turned her cheek at the last moment lest he kissed her lips.
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Back in the Land of the Dead, Victor strolled the desolate, abandoned alleyway behind the tavern. His heart was in shambles after the news from Mayhew that Victoria was getting married. Many emotions ran through him in the heat of the moment: Betrayed, heartbroken, every form of hurt. Approaching a coffin at the end of the alley, he sat near it and pulled out the flower Victoria had given him. Looking down upon the slowly dying flower, he sighed sadly.
“I’m too late…” He said sadly.
Letting the little flower drop to the ground, he slumped down and stared at the ground in defeat. Unbeknownst to him, a certain group of ponies and a baby dragon came beside him and sat by his side. Twilight reached out her hoof and placed it comfortingly on Victor’s hand.
“We’re so sorry Victor,” She said regretfully.
“I cannot begin to fathom just how broken you must feel right now,” Rarity added.
“You poor, poor dear,” Fluttershy wept.
Fluttershy approached from his other side, hurling her arms around him in a hug. Victor, hesitant at first, slowly found his arms coming around the timid Pegasus and returned the hug. Slowly but surely, everyone joined in on the hug as well. After a few moments, they drew away.
“It sucks,” Rainbow shook her head. “But just know we’re for ya till the end buddy.”
“Yer darn tootin’ sugar cube,” Applejack nodded.
“The Great and Powerful Trixie might know something to make you feel better,” Trixie suggested.
Pulling off her hat, she reached her hoof deeply into her hat. After a few seconds, she drew out a large bouquet of flowers and handed them to Victor. He gave a small ghost of a smile before it quickly vanished.
“Thank you all so much for trying,” He sighed. “But I’m afraid it’s no use. Victoria’s getting married tonight, and I won’t even be able to see her one last time. Not even to tell her… I love her.”
Even with her stone-faced expression she always maintained, it seemed for the tiniest moment Maud Pie actually starting showing some emotion. A small tear threatened to trickle its way down her cheek.
“The saddest thing about life after death is knowing the ones you love most in the world must move on without you,” She said plainly.
Pinkie, however, had no problem letting her tears fall freely down her face. She drew a box of tissues from her mane.
“Oh, it’s just so sad!” She cried. “You two were so good together!”
She blew her nose comically before putting the box back into her mane. Little Spike hopped off Twilight’s back and approached Victor. Fluttering his wings, he floated up and landed along Victor’s lap. Victor looked down upon the little dragon, softly petting the scales along his head.
“Don’t worry Victor,” Spike smiled. “We’ll help you get through this somehow.”
Victor smiled faintly again as he looked up toward the group of ponies, who all smiled at him (minus Maud). Before he could say anything, they heard a commotion from the back door of the tavern. Everyone looked at each other curiously before Victor got up and they made their way to the door. Peering into the cracked door, Victor saw Emily, Bright Mac, and Pear Butter talking with Mrs. Plum.
“Oh Mrs. Plum, what am I to do?” Emily asked concerned. “He just walked off without saying a word. Are all men like this?”
“Well I’m afraid none of them are very bright,” Mrs. Plum responded. “They get something in their heads, and you can’t do a thing with them.”
Hearing their talk made Pear Butter frown, as she remembered her father. How he walked away from her when she and Bright Mac got married. And all because of a silly feud he allowed to consume his mind. However, he was still her father and she loved him so dearly. She only wished there were a way to reconcile and for them to finally have closure. Bright Mac noticed his wife’s discomfort and pulled her closer to him.
“Don’t y’all worry now Emily,” Bright Mac spoke up. “Ah’m sure Victor will come round eventually. He just needs time fer all this tah sink in properly. Ah mean after all, this did come upon him rather quickly.”
“Ah gotta agree with Bright Mac,” Pear Butter nodded. “Once he gets more comfortable with the idea, everything will work out just fine.”
It was then Elder Gutknecht came into the kitchen carrying his old book and set it upon the table.
“My dear, we have to talk,” He said.
Maggot, who was residing under one of the pages, had this oddly cheery expression on his little face.
“Let me tell her please,” He offered excitedly. “Let me tell her.”
“What?” Emily asked.
“There is a complication with your marriage,” Gutknecht explained.
“I don’t understand.”
“The vows are binding only until death do you part.”
“What are you saying?”
“Death has already parted you.”
A collective gasp came from Emily, Bright Mac, and Pear Butter simultaneously. Gutknecht was absolutely right. If Emily’s already dead and Victor is still alive, that meant Emily could never be with him.
“The moment he realizes he ain’t really married,” Pear Butter realized. “He’ll simply drift back.”
“If he finds out, he’ll leave,” Emily gasped. “But surely… surely there’s some way to fix this? Please help me, Elder Gutknect. There must be something you can do.”
“Well, there is one way,” Elder Gutknect thought.
“Oh, please, please, let me tell her,” Maggot spoke excitedly.
“It requires the greatest sacrifice.”
“Go on, get to the good part.”
“What y’all sayin’?” Bright Mac asked worriedly.
“We have to kill him!” Maggot answered gleefully.
“What?!?!” Emily and the Apples gasped.
While the three undead souls were utterly shocked at the offer, none were more so shocked than Victor and the group of living Equestrians. As if it weren’t difficult enough that their human friend found himself engaged with an undead, yet very kind bride, now the undead would have to ‘kill’ Victor just to make sure he and Emily could be legally married. Spike was so mortified by even the slightest suggestion of that remark, his purple scales turned a pale shade as he cringed at the thought.
“But Elder Gutknecht,” Pear Butter spoke up. “If we do that, Victor would be givin’ up the life he had… forever!”
“Unfortunately yes, my dear,” Elder Gutknecht nodded, turning the pages. “He would need to repeat his vows in the land of the living and drink from the ‘wine of ages’.”
Elder Gutknect turned to a single page in the book that displayed the sketch of the very bottle. It appeared as grim as the elder referred to it, with a skull drawn along the front of the bottle. The Maggot crawled its way around the page, chuckling over the thought knowing what this brew will do to the boy. Emily gasped in horror, while Pear Butter and Bright Mac looked toward her with concern.
“Poison!” Emily uttered.
“Yer proposin’ we’d ‘poison’ that boy?!?!” Bright Mac asked.
“This would stop his heart forever,” Elder Gutknect explained, approaching Emily. “Only then would he be free to give it to you.”
“I could never ask him,” Emily sighed, crouching.
“She shouldn’t have tah to do that,” Pear Butter agreed. “Keepin’ a weddin’ vow is one thing. But askin’ that poor boy to throw his life away… just to be married? That ain’t a choice at all!”
“Those poor ponies…” Bright Mac sighed. “And our little Apple Pie… they became such good friends! We can’t ask them to let this happen.”
Victor and the group looked on the whole time. Initially, the very thought they were considering to poison Victor would’ve been more than enough to make a run for it. Yet when Twilight and her friends watched closely, they could see how reluctantly they all are to even go through it. Especially Emily, a bride who practically waited her whole ‘after life’ to meet her perfect groom, was suddenly put in a position to decide whether to murder Victor or not.
Before the Equestrians could act, a sight leaves the group very surprised. Victor Van Dort, slowly walking into the room, and toward the undead souls. In particular, he approached Emily.
“You don’t have to,” Victor spoke. “I’ll do it.”
“Victor!” Twilight called out.
The Princess of Friendship, along with the majority of her friends, quickly rushed into the room the moment Victor made his choice.
“What do you think you’re doing?”
“You realize they were just talking about poisoning you, right?” Rainbow asked, raising a brow.
“I know…” Victor nodded. “But what else is there?”
“My boy, if you choose this path you may never return to the world above,” Elder Gutknect warned. “Do you understand?”
The Equestrians looked on toward Victor, who merely turned toward Emily. He reached his arm out, took her undead hands gently, and slowly lifted her up the ground as their eyes gaze toward each other.
“I do,” Victor answered.
“Oh Victor…” Applejack spoke softly.
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In the town square, the Dead have gathered around the statue. The Corpse Bride and Victor stand together to address the gathered crowd.
“Gather round! Gather round, everybody,” Victor called out. “We’ve decided to do this thing properly. So grab what you can and follow us. We’re moving this wedding party ‘upstairs’.”
“Upstairs?” A corpse woman spoke. “I didn’t know we had an upstairs.”
“Sounds creepy,” A corpse child said.
“Let’s go!” A corpse girl shouted.
The undead children ran off with Scraps following closely behind. Soon the entire place was bustling, as the Dead prepared for the upcoming party at the new venue. The hard-working crowd soon began to break out in song.
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Just as Victor hopped off to join the crowd, Rarity quickly approached Victor.
“Victor, wait!” Rarity called out. “You can’t honestly want to go through with this!”
It was then the Black Widow herself zipped down along her web.
“She’s right dear,” The Black Widow replied. “You can’t get married looking like that.”
The spider’s eyes settle on Victor’s filthy, tattered jacket. The spider studied him carefully, shaking her head, and gave a light whistle. All of a sudden, dozens of her fellow spiders descend from above and land upon Victor. Rarity, slightly terrified by the spiders, initially shut her eyes in horror… before taking a quick peek.
Before Rarity’s amazement, the spiders swarmed over Victor… initially tickling him soon as they land. But soon they repaired his tattered suit in Land of the Dead style. The plain, austere fabric now interwoven with glistening spider webs, and glowed with a sinister elegance. Rarity dropped her hooves over her eyes, looking down in astonishment.
“Well… now you look very dapper,” Rarity smiled sheepishly.
“RARITY!!!” The girls shouted
Soon Mrs. Plum lead the singing, stirring a brew of an odd, gnarled ‘dish’ with the other members of the kitchen staff.
“Did somepony say ‘cake’?!” Pinkie cheered, midway.
In the meantime, all the soldier corpses were performing a slight routine out along the square (Even a few reenactments of their glory days on the battlefield). All of whom gathered around Victor, ready to stand by his side for the big night ahead of him.
Victor and the soldiers turn and stared, as the female zombies approached with awe. The Equestrians looked up toward the staircase and they couldn’t help but share the same sentiment. The Corpse Bride, feeling her old cheerful self again, gazed upon the party preparations swirling around her. Her eyes settled on Victor, as the spiders lower her wedding veil upon her head. She beams at the party preparation, as the music reached a fever pitch.
As the crowd gather around Victor and Emily, who prepare to lead them to the ‘upstairs’, there was so much happening all at once. A group of skeletons stagger under the weight of a grotesque, towering wedding cake, decorated with tangled roots and spider webs. It tilted and swayed precariously from side to side. It’s so massive the skeletons dance on the first three layers. Mrs. Plum, on top of the cake, placed the finishing touched as Pinkie Pie hopped along the top. She brushes a bit of frosting with a hoof and licks the frosting for a taste. She turned toward Mrs. Plum and nodded her head with approval.
Some of the skeletons were polished to perfection, while Bojangles’ band packed their instruments for the trip.. even themselves into the coffins. Soon everyone was marching through the streets of the Land of the Dead, ready to go forth for the biggest wedding of their ‘afterlives’.
With that being said, or rather ‘sung’, the residents of the Land of the Dead proceeded toward the living world. Of course, the group of ponies and Spike were all very uncertain of exactly how to feel about all this. On one hoof, they couldn’t be happier for Victor and Emily seeing how this all worked out. But on the other hoof, neither one couldn’t help but feel something was just all… wrong.
All they could do now was going along with it, hoping everything will work out for the best…
Or so they think…
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I’m sure glad the ponies were comfort a distress Victor over the news of his lost chance of love, despite the misunderstanding from earlier. They’re there for Victor sake’s as their a friend in trouble times.
I love this part of the movie, the wedding song was very cheery and sweet in a world of the undead. And poor Victoria married to the creep in a rush hour wedding then they intended. But, it’s won’t be long for the main event that will scare the pants off the townsfolk real soon.
Also, great job on the chapter. Can’t for more!
OC Pony Stallion: "We should all be a shame of ourseleves!" The crowd turned to him
Discord: "What do you mean?"
OC Pony Stallion: "We got mad at him for not keeping his vows but now, he has to die to keep them. We're no worse than any villian in Equestria!" He yelled as they realize their own words hit them hard for guilting Victor
If we thought Victor was truly in quite a pickle before, now it seems his fate is sealed. What initially comes off as an accident, an unintended marriage when he was trying to practice his vows, we would think it's hard enough knowing he finds himself having to keep a promise. But then it turns out this marriage does not seem to matter as to the fact that he is technically still alive and she is already 'Death' in 'Until Death Do You Part', they can't truly be together... unless Victor agrees to be poisoned, so they can be together in death. Initially, Victor would not even dream of taking part of it... not until receiving word that Victoria is marrying Barkis, as rushed of a wedding arrangement as it turns out.
But now that it seems to have happened, all because Victor was absent during that time, now it seems he has nothing to lose anymore. Now with a wedding seemingly not about to happen, he has no choice now but take the poison if it means being married to someone he 'does' initially care about now. Yet even now we can see the guilt not just from Emily (Who initially didn't plan on Victor from going through with it) but also the Mane Six, their friends, and Applejack's parents too (Probably). They were giving him such a hard time about keeping a promise, regardless if it was an accident or not... I'm sure they must feel so ashamed of themselves for what they put him through.
Ooh, ominous. Still feel bad for Victoria, especially considering what Barkis was saying. However, I admire Victor's selfless chivalry
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It's like at this point, it does not matter what misunderstanding there was before. They know when a friend is under such distress, whether it b the stress of the initial wedding plans or the fact the only girl he started to love is now marrying someone else. So much is happening all at once for Victor, there's no point in giving the man a hard time. That it starts to occur to them that if it were them in their place and they lost their chance at finding true love, they'd be miserable for the rest of their lives.
And yes... the song does offer a rather sweet tone in an undead world.
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Oh yes... I do feel bad for Victoria's predicament too. And while what Victor is doing comes off as slightly hasting, suddenly marrying a bride he did not want to be with before... to be fair it seems he's only doing it because he feels he has nothing to lose anymore. No parents pressuring him to marry for financial gain, no in-laws to please. At least it seems that this time Victor is feeling free to make his own choice, even if marrying Emily won't make him entirely happy but at least he'd do it because he cares for what Emily wants.
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True. Still, he is a man with honor
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A measure of a man depends on what honor he carries within him, to do not what is best for himself but to do what is best for others. Especially how he treats a woman or (So as not to leave them out) another man this one person may care about.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Yes indeed
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We don't have too much more to work with. We're actually nearing the end of this story.
Things are starting to get real wrath of gods like crazy now!
Well poison at least gives a quick death great chapter
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I don't know about a 'quick' death, then again I wouldn't know since I have no intent on knowing how poisons work. For all we know, it could be quite a process when it comes to poisons.
Great chapter as always, alas, the end is near for the bell tolls
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Yep. The ending draws ever so closely. It won't be too much longer now.
If there is a moment in a movie in which the protagonists seem to have hit rock bottom, it would be the beginning of this chapter. Victoria is married to a stranger, believing that her love and her friends are trapped and will never return. Victor is not better, although he at least has his friends who try to cheer him up, although they are just as sad, even Maud has started to cry (I wonder if it is because this situation brings back some memory).
It turns out that his marriage to Emily is not valid, because the "until death do part" does not work if you are already dead. However, Victor has lost the will to live, which does not surprise me considering his life so far: his parents did not love him, he does not seem to have friends in their world and his love has apparently "replaced" him (although we know that is not true). Therefore, he agrees to repeat his vows before drinking poison, although he decides to do so in the land of the living (curious demand, but something convenient for the story).
However, while Victor seems determined to move on, the Mane 6, Spike, Trixie, Maud, Pear Butter and Bright Mac have had remorse. Both insisting that Victor should take responsibility for his actions and get angry with him when he did not fulfill the role of his good husband, and now the boy is going to take his own life to do so. Sure they will realize that perhaps they were not fair to him before and that this may be a mistake, but the question is whether they will do it in time before there is no turning back. Sure, Emily is her friend and they want her to be happy, but is this the way to do it?
Well fudge. Forgot about how that poison from the climax came into play to begin with.
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You can't get any more below rock bottom than this. Parents who don't love you, no friends (Not counting the fact Victor has pony friends trying their best), and the love of your life 'replacing' you for someone else (I wouldn't be surprised if my exes suddenly become someone else's problem). But still in Victor's case, it is a rather tough ordeal... so much so even Maud starts showing emotional turmoil which is very rare for her.
And yes I must agree: The ponies were tough on Victor pushing him to take responsibility for his actions and how upset they were when he said those nasty things to Emily. But seeing that Victor is willing to poison himself in the living world, just to properly marry Emily, you'd wonder if maybe they went too far this time. Why the living world instead of just poisoning himself in the Undead world? I don't know... I don't make the rules. But with Victor about to throw his life away and with Victoria stuck in a marriage with a man with ill intentions in mind, we must wonder if it's too little, too late to do something about it.
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Yeah... it's like 'Romeo and Juliet' all over again.
There is so much wrong with this wedding plan. After all not everything is always as it appears to be
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Nothing is ever as it seems to be. Barkis is marrying Victoria for a reason and it's not for the reasons the Everglots believe it is.
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And I think I know what 2 of the reasons are....
Things are getting grim, are they?
I know Emily will make the right choice though.
Meanwhile, back in the theater(s)
Flurry Heart: "Mom! You're the Princess of Love!!! STOP THEM!!!"
Princess Cadence: "I...I...I can't, sweetie! I have to be in there!"
Flurry Heart: (Panicking) "Well do something!"
Queen Novo: "Hmph! Not in my oceans, unfortunately..." (Looks sadly at Victoria) "Poor girl."
Grand Pear looked up at Victoria, and for a brief moment, he could see, in her place, stood his late daughter, bearing the exact same sadness, when he had announced that the Pears would be leaving Ponyville, all those years ago. That one brief moment of flashback struck the old stallion in the heart, as the painful regret returns to haunt him. How insensitive he was towards his daughter's unhappiness, how quick he was to cast aside her feelings for the sake of the Pears' future, and how foolish he was to force her to choose between her family and loved ones. In some ways, he could see a few glimpse of his former, youth in the Everglots (specifically, the mother and father).
Thorax: "I can't watch this." (Covers his eyes with his hoof)
Pharynx: "Me neither." (Covers his eyes)
Autumn Blaze: (Jumps on Princess Cadence) "YOU GOTTA HELP HER, PRINCESS C! STOP THE WEDDING! CALL IT OFF!!! THROW A METEORITE, OR SOMETHING!!! CRASH THE WEDDING! RUIN THE CAKE! DON'T LET HER MARRY THAT BAD DUDE!"
Gabby breaks down crying and hugs Gilda for comfort. Gilda drops her tough girl exterior as she consoles Gabby.
Sweetie Belle: "DON'T DO IT!"
Button Mash: "MAKE. IT. STOOOOOP!!!!" (Covers his eyes as he cries, with Rumble holding in his scream, and Pipsqueak biting his hooves)
Pipsqueak, Button Mash, Rumble, Tender Taps, and Featherweight: "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!"
Snips: "This is a nightmare!" (Turns to Snails) "SNAILS! YOU GOTTA WAKE ME UP!!!" (Gets slapped by Snails) "I needed that!" (Snails grabs a fish and slaps it across Snips) "I needed that too!" (Gets whaled by a bigger a fish) "You're pushing your luck, Snails!"
Snails: "Sorry."
The audience in Discord's theater were all watching anxiously, praying that Victoria doesn't–
...say that.
I simply put on a noise canceling headphone, preparing for the inevitable.
The Audience: "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"
Equestria Girls
The Dazzlings: (Continuing to absorb negative emotions) >:)
Sugarcoat: "...."
Lemon Zest: "What a downer..."
Indigo Zap: "Boo."
Sunny Flare: (Shakes her head)
Sour Sweet: "I'm not gonna cry. I'm not gonna cry." ("STAY IN THERE, TEARS!")
Applejack: (Looks to Sunset Shimmer) "...Sunset? Are ya crying?"
Sunset Shimmer: "No...they are." (Shows Wallflower Blush and Juniper Montage bawling their eyes out, hugging each other AND Sunset Shimmer. Sunset looked as if she's being sandwiched by the two girls, who've become her sidekicks and new best friends...)
Pinkie Pie: (Not wanting to be left out, joins in on the group hug)
Pinkie Pie crying
Sunset Shimmer: (Breaks the fourth wall) "I turned over a new leaf for this?" (Gestures to herself and the three babies)
Like she's one to talk...
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King Julien screams for 5 minutes
King Thorax breaks out crying, with Pharynx slapping him on the face.
Pharynx: "Keep it together man!"
Lil'Cheese breaks out crying, with Cheese Sandwich doing his best to comfort his son.
Button Mash: "I think...I'm gonna be sick."
Gallus and Silverstream both wrapped their wings around each other, with Gallus stroking Silver's hair as she cries. Smolder gently pats Norbert(a)'s back, with Yona giving Sandbar a big bearhug.
Tempest Shadow: "Well what do you know...she can cry."
Mudbriar: "Technically, it's a sniffle."
Tempest Shadow: "SHUT UP!"
Elsewhere
Random bronies/pegasisters: "That sounds oddly familiar...oh...yeah."
Sunset Shimmer Simulator 2015 (feat. WubcakeVA)
Grand Pear held his hoof, wanting the same thing between him and his daughter.
Equestria Girls
Sugarcoat: "Easier said than done."
Autumn Blaze: "Tell her what?"
Both theaters
The Audience(s): "WHAT?!!!"
Sonata Dusk: "Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, SAY WHAT?!"
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Me: (PTSD triggered) "I was this close to being claimed once..."
Discord: (Shrugs) "Well, you either die as the big hero, or live long enough to be the bad guy..."
Gilda: -_-* "I'm gonna eat that worm."
Both theaters
The audience(s): "....WHAT?!"
Me: (Doing my Vincent Price impression) "Well, love conquers all..."
Discord: "OOH! I feel a song coming on." (Snaps on a full tuxedo, complete with a top hat, and a cane) "Perhaps I should join in on the festivity myself." (Does a few dances with the resident undeads)
Fancy Pants: (Fascinated) "My word..."
Fleur De Lis: "C'est magnifique!"
Coco Polomare: "Oh my!"
Sassy Saddles: "Bobbins and bodkins!"
Starstreak: "OMG!"
Lily Lace: "Wow..."
Inky Rose: "Hmmm. Spider threads...that gives me a new idea."
Moonlight Raven: "If it's a new design you're thinking, I'll buy it from you."
Random skeleton: "HEY! Here comes the Corpse Bride!" (His fellow skeletons salute as he sounds off) "PRESENT ARMS!"
Mr. and Mrs. Cakes: (Cringe) "EW!"
Pound and Pumpkin Cakes: "BLECH!"
Grubber: (His face turns green) "OOF! I think I'm gonna be sick..."
Limestone and Marble Pie: "Really?"
Capper Dapperpaws: "Hmmmm. For being dead, these folks have got some groovy beats."
Discord: "You know, we've all been supportive of our friends, from afar for so long, what better way to celebrate this grand occasion...BY PARTAKING IN THIS EVENT OURSELVES?!!!" (Snaps his finger and created a tornado that sucked everyone into the movie)
Button Mash: (Desperately holding onto his seat) "WAIT! I HAVEN'T SAVED MY GAME YET!!!"
Capper Dapperpaw: "Is this how our friends enter the movie?!" (Gets pulled in)
Flurry Heart: "MAMA! PAPA!"
Shining Armor: "HOLD ON TIGHT, FLURRY! PAPA'S GOT YOU!"
At the same time, in a different place, the Equestria Girls were all sucked into the movie as well. The Dazzlings were the first to get sucked in.
Wallflower Blush: "ZOINKS!"
Sunset Shimmer: "JEEPERS!"
Juniper Montage: "JINKIES!"
Pinkie Pie (EqG): "Ruh ROH!"
Sci-Twi: "AAAAAAUGGGGHHH!!!" (With the rest of the Rainbooms and Shadowbolts sucked in)
Rainbow Dash (EqG): "AAAAAAHHH!!!" (Tries to escape with her superspeed, when Discord's lion paw stretched out and grabbed her hair)
Discord: "AH! Where do you think you're going, young lady? You're coming with us!" (Pulls Rainbow Dash into the tornado)
Me: (I'm dressed in my Vincent Price get-up, when I simply shrugged and addressed to the staffs of Discord's theater) "Come with us, if you dare." (I jump into the vortex)
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Great job as always
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Brilliant work, Doc!
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PONIES AND AU HUMANS GETTING SUCKED INTO MOVIES WITH THE HEROES, THE DEAD RISING FROM THE GRAVE, MARRIAGE SACRIFICES, DOGS AND CATS LIVING TOGETHER, MASS HYSTERIA!
THE COSMIC VAIL OF THE MULTIVERSE REALITY IS DISINTEGRATING!!!!!
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me: It hasn't you dummy, otherwise the people who hired me would have call me back to fix the problem.
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Me: Hope you know what you are doing, Discord.
Discord: So do I, Shadowshion, so do I.
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First off, Great commentary!! i feel bad for both Victor, The Mane Six, Applejack's Family, Emily and Victoria.
and... oh, who am i kidding?!?!?! DON'T START WITHOUT ME!!!! WOO-HOO!!! (Jumps inside the vortex)
(Start at 4:50)
(Laughs as he is flying alongside with the others inside the vortex and says the 11th doctor's catchphrase):
GERONIMOOOOO!!!!!
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AWESOME!!
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wait for me boss CANNONBALL!!! ( jump into the vortex)
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Don’t start without me!!!!!! (Jumps in still holding the whiskey from Harry Potter)
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More guest stars then expected
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Me: Well I guess I can watch the rest of the movie in the meantime I better get the merchandise for the next movie ready
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Oh yes indeed... at least for the commentary section anyway. Unless of course the group get one or two mentions during the upcoming reception.
I wish my muitl-character shadowshion can join this story, tell them about himself, look for adventures, horrors , etc, sadly after job I got to go back guarding the black book.
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Woah ok let’s just take a deep breath, in and out.
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Well yes, there are lives harder than stone, and Maud knows the subject better than anyone. Maybe it is too late to change if we see it from Victoria and Victor's point of view, but in this story maybe our friends ponies (and dragon), both living and dead, can do something ... or maybe there is another character who has something to say.
If it is true that the rules are not entirely logical, because if they were, why did the souls of Bright Mac and Pear Butter go to this dimension instead of staying on the other side of Equestria?
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Didn't you just--oh, forget it!
It seems too late for Victor and Victoria at this point. Victoria and Barkis seemed to have made their union together official (Though an important note may change all that), whereas for Victor... well it seems he's sealed his own fate when he's decided to do whatever it takes to ensure his marriage to Emily is official (Even if that means poisoning himself). At least it seems it's because not because he has to do anything or that he was told to do it... he willingly volunteered himself to do it because he feels he 'wants' to be with someone he wants to be happy (Even if he's not happy).
And had you actually been paying attention several chapters ago, you'd realize why Bright Mac and Pear Butter are in 'this' Land of the Living and not in Equestria... must I have to REMIND you? *Sighs* Humans...
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Excellent work, as always. I saw The Dark Knight's reference.
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There was a Dark Knight reference in there?
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AH but your forgetting my friend,(if you seen the movie), There's a plot twist in there,(which I'm keeping my mouth after this) that they(the ones who haven't seen the movie yet) don't know what happens next?.
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We know what happens next, we've seen the bloody movie... it's how we're choosing to handle those chapters that beg the question. Sheesh! Humans...
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Hey! I was just making comedic references!
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What’s with the “Humans” slang and attitude?
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that's a references for the show called the lion guard, from the cheetah girl I believe who had problems returning a baby baboon to it family.
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Cool it, shadow. I was talking to the master.