Sometimes you lose yourself in your own narcissism. That's when you find out you might be the bad guy.
Without a purpose in her life, Tempest Shadow decides to harness the power of friendship for herself. Cause if Twilight beat the Storm King so easily it must be a powerful thing.
The only problem is that becoming friends is hard and each of the creatures she befriends are all odd. But Equestria is now a larger part of the world and Tempest has to deal.
If only Grubber wasn't way too into this.
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It's off to an enjoyable start. Grubber and Tempest are a fun duo to see in action and I think they bounced off each other really well. Tempest's internal dialogue was also great and I could just feel her annoyance at being dragged into something like this.
LOL, I too may have seen Rarity as an anoying diva many times, especially in the early seasons.
Also using Grubber as the hook to pull Tempest into this made her fall into Twilight's plan. The hint of Tuna was also nice to see.
Grubber's plans for how to deal with an angry Tempest were interesting.
A nearby sink? Doesn't the transformation need I dunno... space to fit a whole seapony? I felt the ending to that section was perhaps a bit on the nose. I'm not sure Sky is quite that dumb. BUT... it did give ma a great laugh, so for how comedic it is and the excuse for it later, I'm happy to let it slide. At least it's clear she's intelligent enough to live
...and probably cause many amusing headaches for her new best friend.
The ending scene sets up for what comes next well and I look forward to seeing this sleep over and I wonder when other additions will join this crazy group.