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How would she know that?
Wait, is there even a spell for that?
Correct me if I’m wrong, but isn’t celestia stronger than twilight?
She held a grudge for that long without talking about it?
Is this a trick?
Why?
Is there a difference?
What does that mean?
Wait, what is sunset planning to do to twilight?
Is that what she thinks?
great story can't wait for more. also totally agree with the fact that tia eats to much cake
10928409
No, only this. It is Chazkopa’s story.
10928644
Deleted.
10928658
Sorry, it was not my best work.
10928662
Ask Chazkopa...
She, not he.
knew
You mean told, and remove is.
Sweet chapter. After that done, I won't asked you for a request story.
Is this foreshadowing something?
That’s actually debatable.
Did he?
How did she complete the spell? She is in no mindset for the key part. Friendship. She really shouldn't be an alicorn by that means.
And Cadance. I work have said no wedding till they make up
10937292
I learned the hard way to not do what you just did.
I wonder if Twilight realizes that it looks like Spike does believe her but is unable to do anything due to peer pressure pretty much or something?
10937643
I don’t think so.
Since the next chapter will be the last one, I speculate Sunset & her crew plan to visit Equestria to confront Sparkle's friends & family for their misconduct yes? Why does Flash believe it's a prank?
10938178
When does he say he thinks it’s a prank? I may have missed that.
10938319
It's near the end.
10938793
Oh ok.
Awesome.
You mean 'long time and no see'
It's Celestia
You forgot to added his wings.
You missing with it.
What happened with the other races and kingdoms?!
And why are you doing this "Demon" gimmick again?
One of these days. They all gonna regret turning themselves into demons. When a certain Someone or a Faction wants to slaughtered them all, because they are demonic monsters, and abominations.
10977100
Did you not read the lengthy explanation? I am pretty sure it says: Request idea: Chazkopa.
What was the point in rewriting the story if there were more questions in this one then the last one?
10977109
Because Chazkopa had requested from BBBHuey on DeviantArt to make this into a comic book which he did and it was almost entirely different from the one that I wrote.
10977100
Did you just notice it was rewritten? Because I didn’t see you in the comments for a while.
10977108
Yeah so?
10977114
I was commenting other stories, or doing something at home. But, I thought this is another version of that "Demon Empire" with Sunset and Twilight.
Plus, it DIDN'T say this is a rewrite, okay.
10977125
10977113
Do you mind explaining how?
10977125
Good point
10977137
How what?
10977139
Thanks.
10977133
Okay. I should have explained it better. But, now I know that it was Chazkopa's request for this story to be made. Got it.
10977151
Sorry for being aggressive.
10977151
You’re welcome.
10977153
I just don't like demons. For obvious reasons. ( Except for the ones in Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss. Other then that. Rip and Tear, and For the Emperor, purge them in holy fire!!!!! )
10977143
How it was almost entirely different.
10977161
Correct me if I’m wrong, but I don’t think anyone does.
10977133
You did not add the part that 'But her plea is ignored as she is taken away to join the others as they are to be converted as well. But not before Sunset told the mane five that she had ordered her army to bring their families so that she could turn them into demons. Horrified with a shriek, Rarity pleads with Spike not to let the demons capture their families. But Spike angrily refused to listen to her, and he told Rarity that he had given up his old crush on her for his new crush on EQG Sweetie Belle, who's now a demon, and he also said he regrets not believing Twilight about the fake Cadance.'
The music describes Spike, Shining Armor, and Princess Cadance joining Sunset to be with Twilight.
10977233
It became too wordy, I tried different things to get it to work but I am sorry to say it didn't. It would not have made a lick of difference. The results would have been in theory: the same.
10977243
You are right. Thank you for my request story. I like that Twilight had talked to Sweetie Belle about Spike.
By the way, what did you think of the music that describes that Spike, Shining Armor, and Princess Cadance joined Sunset to be with Twilight?. It's called Samurai Warriors 5 - Nagashino (Oda) OST ~SW5 Mix~ EXTENDED.
10977248
I believe that the song is absolutely awesome!
10977251
I'm glad you like it.
Speaking of which, since you won't do the sequel of Consequences of Betrayal and Retribution. Is it all right that can I asked someone to do the sequel if you don't mind?.
10977257
I have absolutely no problems with this. Good luck my friend!
10977269
I might asked Timeman202 or someone else to do sequel request story of Consequences of Betrayal and Retribution.
10977291
That would be interesting. There are a lot of things you could do with a story like this.
While it was mentioned on what they plan to do with Luna, we end up not seeing what exactly happened to her afterwards, which is odd.
10978345
Honestly, a lot of things in this story is odd.
10977269
It's armor, not armour.
10979083
That can actually depend on what dialect you have, in the Celtic and English isles we say and write Armour. But I have heard that Americans (and others) spell it like Armor. So I won’t be changing this one. Sorry.
10979144
That's all right. I like that Apple Bloom and Scootaloo were accepted as Snips and Snails' girlfriends.