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The history of Equestria is full of evil that sought to undo all of that which the Royal Princesses had fought to create. But none so powerful as the father of all ponies. Creator and God of Gods, his reign was ended by his own two daughters. But he is back. And more powerful than ever. Even capable of removing an Alicorns power. Who is to stop him now ?
EDIT : Season 1 & 2 cannon. Does not include facts, characters, or other information from season 3 onward.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

How tired does a pony have to be not notice having wings after referencing them twice and seeing them once in a mirror?

That's my only oddity, good story so far dood.

1179255
Lol, I thought it'd be funny if she didn't know at first what had happened. Making the whole confrontation all that more severe.

1179318 I did think it was funny too, despite it being a odd thing, dood.
Twilight's expression when she finds out about this is always priceless, dood. In nearly every fic that has her turning into a Alicorn.

1179333
Lol, just wait. It gets better.

Ooooops? Maybe Luna would believe that Twilight just 'borrowed' things?

:trollestia: Well, you were studying alicorns ... why not close up? :twilightoops:

That's an "oh shit" moment if I ever saw one. :twilightoops:

1179484
Indeed. But sadly i wanted a larger audience so I left the Teen rating. Not oh shit moments.

:facehoof:

Can't wait for next chapter :trollestia: :twilightoops:

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