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Timothy1509


I have been writing Twirax stories since 2019.

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The mane six and Thorax are off to a very exhilarating camping trip in the Everfree forest after some hard work at defending their kingdoms from hazards and attacks. During a few weeks, King Thorax and Princess Twilight have been spending some time together and they have been attracted to each other for a while. And after a five months of spending time reading books and protecting their Kingdoms with each other, Thorax has bought a very pulchritudinous engagement ring from a store in Ponyville and brought it along to the entertaining camping trip. Will Thorax be able to propose to his love Twilight Sparkle?

New story! I hope you all will enjoy this one as well! Also, I do not own My Little Pony, it belongs to Hasbro. And the coverart that I am using belongs to my good friend Rhino932 Toon.
Here's the link to it
https://www.deviantart.com/rhino932/art/Thorax-proposal-to-Twilight-854339745

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Cute story overall. While it was cute, one thing that also seemed odd was that Twilight was trying to deny that she had a crush on Thorax even after they had fifteen dates, and it became even odder when Twilight was so happy to marry Thorax at the end, if she couldn't even admit she had feelings for him. She didn't just have a crush on him, she was in love and would have more likely instead been happy about the others thinking they could make a good husband and wife..

Unless it's just out of pity for them, you usually won't date someone if you, at best, like them as a close friend or sibling. I could see Twilight trying to tell herself she doesn't love Thorax, or that it's too soon to even think about marriage, but found out how much she really wanted to marry Thorax when he proposed. Or, that she wants to marry him, but thought that he wasn't ready.

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Thank you so much for your comment and correcting my mistake ThePinkedWonder. I hope to improve in my future stories.

And I wish you luck on yours as well!

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Twilight was so happy to marry Thorax at the end, if she couldn't even admit she had feelings for him. She didn't just have a crush on him, she was in love and would have more likely instead been happy about the others thinking they could make a good husband and wife..

Yeah I know, I found that a bit odd as well but, I learned that from like a few romantic movies. As well as some romantic stories on Fimfiction.

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I have seen something similar to that a lot in shows, like when someone has a crush and others have figured it out, but they don't want to admit it. Much like how Twilight didn't have to admit she liked Flash Sentry in EQG. Or when a couple have gotten together but gets embarrassed if someone teases them about getting married, which seemed to be closer to what happened with Twilight.

If Twilight either didn't want to admit she was in love, or just through marrage was too soon (at the time, but later changed her mind) it wouldn't have felt odd--and would have been even cuter to boot.

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Much like how Twilight didn't have to admit she liked Flash Sentry in EQG.

I remember that episode, it was quite hysterical to be honest because she kept blushing and talking to him in an anxious tone. But, I don't like the Flashlight ship when I witnessed how Flash shouted at Twilight and making her very disconsolate, which is not a nice thing to do. And I see Thorax is kind of nicer to her, and he is more of a book reader like Twilight. That was the reason why I ship Thorax and Twilight Sparkle together. Because, those two are like two a nerdy couple.

which seemed to be closer to what happened with Twilight.

Yep, and I got that method from a few romantic movies and some romance stories on Fimfiction.

If Twilight either didn't want to admit she was in love, or just through marrage was too soon (at the time, but later changed her mind) it wouldn't have felt odd--and would have been even cuter to boot.

Yeah I like to close off a few of my Twirax stories like that. And again, thank you for reading my story!

well finally done with the story I would've finish it sooner if I was int busy with other stories, work, and setting up my birthday party but anyway good story my friend nothing bad at all well mabay small ones but there small so no one well maybe see them I have nothing else to say so good luck stay awesome my friend and remember don't rush I'll be looking frd to the next chat we have

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Thank you for your reply buddy. And happy birthday.

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It's actually a Movie, not an episode.

Technically, Flash is Mind Controlled by the Dazzlings. But then again, he didn't Apologize to Twilight after.

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Okay I guess. Thank you for correcting my mistake. I haven't watched Equestria Girls for a while now.

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