Came back to this one, finally. You're friggen good. Adorable spots of characterization and a filly's wandering mind, plenty of world-implicating lewd details, and just a great tone of questionable innocence and impending sexiness.

I wanna see more ponies from you. <3

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You're too generous with your praise. I'm just throwing out whatever sounds hot to me at the moment.
Admittedly, worldbuilding is pretty hot to me. I want a world where these things happen, so I frequently spend more time building the world than the scene.

As for more ponies, I'm sorry it's taking so long. I have so many ideas and so little time to write them. There will be more though, I just don't know which idea will be finished first.